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A thorny story

I share a tree with a story to tell: We were out for a walk round Dufton Pike when this straggly hawthorn conveyed its spell, holding my gaze on our afternoon hike. A closer study showed not one but two thorns twisted, contorted in a struggle, their limbs, their joints entwined and tangled through a wrestling of arms that writhe and tussle. Or might this be some sibling rivalry played out for decades to all those who pass this way? A contest to show how vitally rivals arise competing to outclass. Best not to draw too close lest I get caught in this thicket of thorns without support. Sorry I can't post the photo.(/em>

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Date: 3/20/2024 5:56:00 AM
Nice use of symbolism in your true to life tale Lisle
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 9:38:00 AM
You can but you have to be a premium member. $39
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Lisle Ryder
Date: 3/20/2024 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Tom. I wish I could us the facility for posting a photo.
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