A Thorn Alouette

You don't ever pierce
Though your look is fierce
Each rose is safe in your hold.
Green snakes scroll around.
Flies move with no sound
In heat and cold, you stand bold.

As rose buds feel dread
Your sharp claws you spread
Are you their unseen backbone?
Each rose fades and falls
When Time, from far, calls
Do you mourn for them alone?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Canerdy Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Christuraj, CONGRATS on your win with this expressive poem. Janice
Alex Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 6:08 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Kauffman Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 11:58 AM
Chris, such a plaintive verse of fading beauty with a touch of melancholy! I love the reference to the thorns that protect the rose like a "backbone!" So creative! Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Always wonderful to hear from you.
Alex Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 6:08 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... and likewise for your comment... God bless you.
Alex Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 6:09 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
George Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 3:50 AM
No one will think of writing about a thorn. But you chose to write on it and have done a great job. "Each rose fades and falls When Time, from far, calls". I feel sad when flowers wither and die, especially roses. Today in our area, five medical students died in an accident and three are critically injured.... So sad! Congratulations Chris on your win.
Alex Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 6:10 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You! R.I.P the demised stuident. Fatee has no time.
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 11:28 PM
Your second verse is so sophisticated. I really liked your idea of writing about a thorn. Congrats in my contest
Alex Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 11:37 PM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity. In fact, I learn much when I participate in your contest. May God Bless You!
mysore Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 8:46 PM
unique write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Alex Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 10:50 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Read Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:36 AM
I enjoyed reading your rhyming Alouette Christuraj, is it for the contest. Xx
Alex Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 5:54 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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