A Test of Alliterative Conscience

My conscience came to a clearing,
Freed from clamorous cacophony
Of criers, critics, and claimants
  That commonly carp at me.

Calm, cool contemplation
Called out its care and concern:
Consider a commitment to courage
  Fortitude's clear-headed urn.

Calculating quickly a crisis,
I had come to the critical curve:
Could I commit to courage and clarity--
  Or into craven cowardice would I swerve?

My conscience had come to a clearing:
Could I conquer my demons this time?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Great alliterative poem, Gershon. |Love your message. Well done.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Back with congrats my friend! xomo :)
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Thank you, Maureen! Mucho appreciato. :) Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:30 PM
This is so good! ...my conscience came to a clearing. Congrats!
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:52 PM
High praise, Kim, from someone I almost always look up to every contest. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you so much! And congrats to you on your winning entry, 'Ends,' a haunting, stunning write. :) Gershon
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on your win. Enjoyed reading... you passed test coincidently...
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thanks for stopping at my site, Susan,...and extra thanks for your verdict on the test: It's one I face every day. Best wishes, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 10:18 PM
Delicious soup!
Wolf Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Kind-hearted comment, keenly appreciated. Best wishes, Comrade Volkov (Wolf, in Russian, is Volk).
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Breathtakingly brilliant, Gershon! Creative crystalline cisterns of cool water consciousness. Sensational sparks of scintillating poetry. Loved it a lot . Love and more love always.
Wolf Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Your alliterative allusions amaze and astound, FRJ!! I think your comment deserves a trophy prize!! Love and Roses; Caring and Concern, Eternal, my brother. Ciao! Gershon
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