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A Test of Alliterative Conscience

My conscience came to a clearing, Freed from clamorous cacophony Of criers, critics, and claimants That commonly carp at me. Calm, cool contemplation Called out its care and concern: Consider a commitment to courage Fortitude's clear-headed urn. Calculating quickly a crisis, I had come to the critical curve: Could I commit to courage and clarity-- Or into craven cowardice would I swerve? My conscience had come to a clearing: Could I conquer my demons this time?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/24/2018 10:48:00 PM
Great alliterative poem, Gershon. |Love your message. Well done.
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:10:00 PM
Back with congrats my friend! xomo :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2018 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! Mucho appreciato. :) Gershon
Date: 3/22/2018 5:30:00 PM
This is so good! ...my conscience came to a clearing. Congrats!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2018 9:52:00 PM
High praise, Kim, from someone I almost always look up to every contest. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you so much! And congrats to you on your winning entry, 'Ends,' a haunting, stunning write. :) Gershon
Date: 3/22/2018 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Enjoyed reading... you passed test coincidently...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/22/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thanks for stopping at my site, Susan,...and extra thanks for your verdict on the test: It's one I face every day. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 3/20/2018 10:18:00 PM
Delicious soup!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/21/2018 1:24:00 PM
Kind-hearted comment, keenly appreciated. Best wishes, Comrade Volkov (Wolf, in Russian, is Volk).
Date: 3/20/2018 8:41:00 PM
Breathtakingly brilliant, Gershon! Creative crystalline cisterns of cool water consciousness. Sensational sparks of scintillating poetry. Loved it a lot . Love and more love always.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/20/2018 9:26:00 PM
Your alliterative allusions amaze and astound, FRJ!! I think your comment deserves a trophy prize!! Love and Roses; Caring and Concern, Eternal, my brother. Ciao! Gershon

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