A Tear In the Sand

There on the sands of time , he poured his heart out . Watched as it blew with the wind, to mix with the other grains. A tear coursed down his cheek, to land upon the parched sand. His head he dropped in sorrow, to see a flower where the tear had landed. There in the stark barren landscape , a tiny bit of color bloomed. warming his heart, more than the sun ever could.
Placement: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations Paula in the contest of Brian Strand "A Free Choice" Love, Carol
George   Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 4:14 PM
This goes to my favorites, Paula. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 1:44 PM
great to read a free verse from you, paula..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
Susan Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 1:41 PM
congratulations on your win! a lovely piece :)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Congrats Paula on this terrific win for third place..so honored to be sharing with one of the very best..and a good friend too luv..enjoy..
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 10:05 AM
I really enjoyed this one, Paula. Belated congrats in this contest of Brian. I cannot keep up with these contest winners of his, much as I want to read them all!
Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 7:55 AM
Nice reading and congratulations Paula. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 7:54 AM
This poem almost seems as if it is the ancient legend from a piece of classic poetry........lovely tale, Paula. Just lovely! :) (many thanks for my 2nd in your recent contest, by the way. I'm so honored!)
R Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Wow...so deep. Little things can make you smile when you cry, you just see them with the eye of your heart. Great writing!
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