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A Tear In the Sand

There on the sands of time , he poured his heart out . Watched as it blew with the wind, to mix with the other grains. A tear coursed down his cheek, to land upon the parched sand. His head he dropped in sorrow, to see a flower where the tear had landed. There in the stark barren landscape , a tiny bit of color bloomed. warming his heart, more than the sun ever could.
Placement: 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/18/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations Paula in the contest of Brian Strand "A Free Choice" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 4:14:00 PM
This goes to my favorites, Paula. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:44:00 PM
great to read a free verse from you, paula..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:41:00 PM
congratulations on your win! a lovely piece :)
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Date: 7/16/2011 11:36:00 AM
Congrats Paula on this terrific win for third place..so honored to be sharing with one of the very best..and a good friend too luv..enjoy..
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Date: 7/16/2011 10:05:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one, Paula. Belated congrats in this contest of Brian. I cannot keep up with these contest winners of his, much as I want to read them all!
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Date: 7/16/2011 7:55:00 AM
Nice reading and congratulations Paula. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:54:00 AM
This poem almost seems as if it is the ancient legend from a piece of classic poetry........lovely tale, Paula. Just lovely! :) (many thanks for my 2nd in your recent contest, by the way. I'm so honored!)
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Date: 5/26/2010 2:59:00 AM
Wow...so deep. Little things can make you smile when you cry, you just see them with the eye of your heart. Great writing!
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