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THIS IS A SUGGESTED ALTERNATIVE PRESENTATION ( MADE WITH HER PERMISSION) OF JAMI PATT'S TRADITIONAL RHYME POEM THAT CAN BE VIEWED ON HER PAGE https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/oceans_embrace_a_warriors_heart_1746995
MY VERSION OF JAMI'S POEM IS...is an open form (designed to be read aloud) a visual form without punctuation & capitalisation where cadence is detemined by the natural 'one breath length' of the human voice.
IT IS ENTIRELY JAMI'S WORDS POSTED TO ENABLE HER TO SEE MY SUGGESTION