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A Tanka For You

Fall in love again; your words tempting me to dance in the whirl of love, swirling and twirling my heart; a different Spring this time! ======================== By :kashinath karmakar (23rd Feb.2011)

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/28/2013 5:55:00 AM

amazing Tanka Kash, just browsing your oldies,, excellent poetry will return...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2012 10:48:00 PM

Just reading this wonderful oldie of yours. About the poem of mine you just saw. I don't like it. I am feeling very uninspired by the all the contests up there right now. I have five written down that I need to try but not one is striking my muse as being a topic I can write on. well, here I go, trying to answer all my comments. It's nice to see you here!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2011 5:55:00 PM

thankxx Kashinath for your kind comments on my contest entry luv.. good luck to u as well in all contests u enter .. a great talent are u.my friend..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2011 12:21:00 PM

Invigorating and exciting words Kashinath ... full of energy and romance..enjoyed my friend with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/24/2011 5:19:00 PM

ah I hope I understood right with your take on the word "spring" here--like the "spring" in one's step when one is in love? very nice & sweet thoughts you have here, Kashinath :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/24/2011 3:30:00 AM

This is lovely Kash ;) quite a gem you have here, especially your last line

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 9:21:00 PM

You are going for a whirl with this one, kash. is it for any contest? It 's pure delight, and yes, I agree with Daver, the different spring line is nice and mysterious!