A Tale of the Crows


Some  crows  living  in  a  banyan tree in a jungle 
wanted  to  see  themselves  as  peacocks.
They wished  to  dance  like  peacocks  in  the  rain .
So , they  wore  the  fallen  feathers  of  the peacocks,
and if those were not  available , their   artificial  feathers.
They  claimed  that  their  forefathers  were  peacocks ,
and   named   the banyan tree  the " Peacock Tree ,"
discarding   the  earlier  name given by  their  ancestors !

As  the  years  rolled  by, some  nomadic  peacocks
in  various  forums  , both inside  and  outside  the  jungle
claimed the "Peacock Tree "and surrounding places
as  their  ancestral home.
They  contended  that , long  ago  ,
the  crows  started  migrating  there from other places
and  identified  themselves  as  descendants of peacocks.
As  their  population   increased  much  more   
than  that   of  the peacocks  over  time
they  ousted  the   peacocks  from  their  home .

Some  learned  crows  decried  the tale  presented
by the peacocks as fictitious ,stating that 
the "Peacock Tree" was not the original name
of the  tree  they had been living  under for so  long.
They also refused the claim that the peacocks were
the  forefathers  of  the  crows,as had been asserted
long ago.

The  claims  and  counterclaims  were  ongoing.

(First in the Poetry Contest, entitles "ALLEGORY (Fables and Parables)" sponsored by Crystol Woods.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Woods Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 6:22 AM
I loved that you followed the true meaning of a parable and told a natural story to explain a spiritual truth! Plus it's a great story! Thanks for sharing it in my contest! Xo
Singh Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 3:45 AM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Ha. Sounds very similar to things going on in the world today. Will peacocks never Learn?
Singh Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 3:48 AM
That's the question.Thank you
Pandit Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 6:35 AM
This is has meaning for humans..enjoyed reading your story, Akham.
Singh Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 3:48 AM
Thank you
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace