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A Tale of Love

we painted rainbows you and I, 'cross our golden sky; one by one the years rolled away, but a vow,once made, still lives on, brightly,as before; this pot of treasure worth much more than gold; riches,untold to sustain us,as we grow old; this love,grows not cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 5:56:00 PM
Extremely grateful Brian for your kind and appreciation for: "Whispering angel". I am so glad to be part of such a great forum of great poets to keep learning, growing and sharing my gift. Thanks again, Walter.
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Date: 8/8/2011 5:27:00 AM
A beautiful write Brian.. This made me smile today :)
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Date: 8/8/2011 5:16:00 AM
Beautiful Verse, Brian. Thank you for sharing. Elaine
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:45:00 AM
a beautiful write, top poem i like a lot
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