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 Metrical Tale Cash Prize Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Hilo Poet

Sixth Place

video Golden Salt "Knocking On Heavens Door"

 


                           Expectations high did not pan out                              
                           Knight in shining armor not what you thought 
                           Once again on the market for Mister Knight
                           Yet Monsieur Next is whom you settle for
                           Au contraire.

                           Ever at their beckoning,
                           beaten down by hollow lovers,
                           prayers to Lucifer then wonders why
                           system of time reckoning in Babylon                                        
                           The last knight bids you goodbye.

                           Golden girl purest of all, 
                           virgin's perfection, an act so tight 
                           you’d win an ordained election
                           His newest prized illusion 
                           quickly recognizes your self-deception, 
                           a paragon for his selection.

                           Proclaiming loyalty, faithful true blue,
                           behind an eminent front faultless 
                           A pattern you’ll see a struggling guru
                           The adage goes, it takes two to tango
                           so you know.
 
                           Dark angel baring broken wing, 
                           you’re the crier at night, days scorpion’s sting
                           Sybarite bon vivant emersed in rituals 
                           Facetious and obscure devotions.

                           Suffering and desperate while
                           egotists lead the way, pseudo shamans 
                           Seeker of trends, network of cults root
                           Altering drugs mailable mind bends,
                           notorious psychedelics do the trick                                   
                           Not for messed up heads a real 
                           crapshoot.

                           Luciferians when you accepted Him 
                           as your knight, informed He is the evil 
                           leader of light the bringer of dawn 
                           Evil forces free will and no consequences 
                           and achiever of tasks
                           Risky for commoners like you
                           who hide behind masks.
                
                           An angel banished from heaven,
                           for craving omnipotence at all cost
                           Hell's indelible denizen in
                           Dante’s Inferno or
                           Milton’s Paradise Lost,
                           Kundalini Serpent, Astaroth, Azazel, 
                           Beelzebub, the morning star
                           Tainted love you’ve tired of
                           Lies and deception are your enemies
                           Deserving of this not you and so
                           heil the magik that ills and pains
                           although your nature has it 
                           you do the same.

                           The Epicurus God Paradox bent
                           Thoughts feeding your madness                                       
                           nightmares attack spinning into 
                           a vicious downward spiral
                           Ashamed and a drag, filled with 
                           hate and sadness.

                           Epiphany emerges lightning flashes
                           lit, Edison’s medicine, aware that He
                           Lord of the Lightning is
                           socially frightening, you
                           return on a grace spawned
                           golden path just for you.

                           Epicureanism notions a bit askew,
                           at the very least, falls short of the bigger picture 
                           You get it now—evil doesn’t limit God
                           God ultimately is the way to overcome evil 
                           All else pales before His glowing standard   
                           You see that you have a choice 
                           to pursue Him, learn His ways 
                           and most importantly, 
                           have a relationship with Him 
                           He’ll take care of you.

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Date: 1/5/2024 12:59:00 PM
Great dark storytelling.. you do this very well dear Anaya.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:17:00 PM
Oh, it's been a while. I'll need to re-read my dark thoughts. I'm sure there is light at the end. Thank you, SO
Date: 1/4/2024 12:14:00 PM
Your poetry evokes powerful emotions and showcases your exceptional writing skills. I am truly inspired by the depth and insight you bring, Anaya. It is undeniably true that God holds the key to conquering evil. Congratulations on your win, by the way, regarding your inquiry about my poem, I don't believe Pangie has had the chance to read it yet.
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:19:00 PM
I would like poets to know that. I would never leave such dark thoughts without a light at the end of the tunnel. Pangie would just adore your...Zobra The Greek!
Date: 1/9/2023 1:13:00 PM
Love your line, "God ultimately is the way to overcome evil," So True. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 1/22/2023 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. Blessed day to you!
Date: 1/7/2023 4:19:00 PM
Wow, this is such a powerful dark poem, Anaya, love your diversity, on this site.
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Date: 1/8/2023 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Harry. I appreciate that! Happy and healthy new year!
Date: 1/7/2023 3:15:00 PM
Quite a dark verse Anaya, we should never give up on hope always heading for the light. Best of luck in the contest. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Date: 1/8/2023 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. Have a nice day!
Date: 1/7/2023 1:33:00 PM
An intimate tour-de-force of vulnerability, innocence lost, and divine grace bestowed. An unflinching account of Phoenix arising from a soul's ruins. GL, Robert
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Date: 1/8/2023 9:08:00 AM
You got it Robert! Thank you for your awesomeness and your review. ~Anaya
Date: 1/7/2023 9:55:00 AM
A dark tour de force, Anaya. Great and good luck in the contest. ;o]
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Date: 1/7/2023 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, ;o]! A downward spiral is defined as a situation where a series of negative thoughts, emotions, and actions continuously feed back into themselves, causing the situation to become progressively worse. Downward spirals are often provoked by jumping to the worst-case conclusion. :D
Date: 1/7/2023 2:52:00 AM
Your last paragraph is your redeeming feature. When you follow the light you will know that darkness cannot possess you.
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Date: 1/7/2023 10:54:00 AM
Some come back, Victor. Good to be optimistic :D
Date: 1/6/2023 10:48:00 AM
Anaya, what horrendous way to live, being a crier at night and a scorpion's sting by day, but you've allowed hope to dark angels. My sentiments for you wonderfully composed poem.
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:58:00 AM
You get it Jenna. Sometimes they see the light! I was compelled, overcome, and totally inspired by a NEW poetess here, good luck to her!

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