A Sweet Life

honeybees in sun
hover through hours like honey
red gold and green blooms

faceted stained fields
fragrant like fumed fantasies
flaunting like fashions

hypnotizing hum
hot high noon activities
plum hourly humdrum

colorflowerinsectsunshinetimehaiku

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Linda Alice Fowler

November 26, 2023 at 5:51 PM

Lovely internal rhyming and alliteration dear Evelyn. And such a sweet message of sweet nature. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

November 27, 2023 at 1:36 PM

I deeply appreciate your lovely comments, Linda. Thank you so much. :)

Christina Bowring

November 10, 2023 at 3:57 AM

This is a delightful Haiku dear Evelyn full of vivid imagery, alliterations and I love your use of colour. Such a delicate, tranquil read of which you have described so well ‘a sweet life’ indeed. Great title. ‘Fragrant like fumed fantasies’ - love that line. What a pleasure to read your beautiful creation. Have a lovely day sweet, artistic, dear friend. Hugs and smiles xx :):)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

November 10, 2023 at 5:55 AM

Thank you for all the lovely things you had to say, dear friend. Your kind expressions are valued so much. I hope your day is wonderful, too. Hugs, smiles and blessings. :)