A Sweet Life

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honeybees in sun hover through hours like honey red gold and green blooms faceted stained fields fragrant like fumed fantasies flaunting like fashions hypnotizing hum hot high noon activities plum hourly humdrum

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/26/2023 5:51:00 PM

Lovely internal rhyming and alliteration dear Evelyn. And such a sweet message of sweet nature. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/27/2023 1:36:00 PM

I deeply appreciate your lovely comments, Linda. Thank you so much. :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/10/2023 3:57:00 AM

This is a delightful Haiku dear Evelyn full of vivid imagery, alliterations and I love your use of colour. Such a delicate, tranquil read of which you have described so well ‘a sweet life’ indeed. Great title. ‘Fragrant like fumed fantasies’ - love that line. What a pleasure to read your beautiful creation. Have a lovely day sweet, artistic, dear friend. Hugs and smiles xx :):)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/10/2023 5:55:00 AM

Thank you for all the lovely things you had to say, dear friend. Your kind expressions are valued so much. I hope your day is wonderful, too. Hugs, smiles and blessings. :)