a sweet hiku

two alone swaying to dulcet tunes playing . . . delicious kisses

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Howard Kerr

Date: 5/28/2025 11:42:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea, On your success. Apt imagery so beguiling and of course the overarching narrative. Excellent work on your part Howard

Ink Empress

Date: 5/28/2025 11:07:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your well deserved top win! Sending you light! #teamhiku! Yeass !!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/28/2025 10:45:00 PM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a romantic write. Wish you a blissful day.

JCB Brul

Date: 5/28/2025 10:14:00 PM

Awwww, so sweet!! Congratulations ^__^

Paige Hind

Date: 5/28/2025 10:41:00 AM

Beautiful. <3

Ink Empress

Date: 5/28/2025 7:47:00 AM

Ah how sweet and romantic too! Such a beautiful hiku! I love always the word " dulcet" best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Karen Jones

Date: 5/28/2025 1:10:00 AM

Ah romantic! Well done!