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On Israeli (agricultural) kibbutzim years ago, the highest prestige jobs were in the fields; the lowest-prestige jobs were in the kitchen/dining room or in a classroom, teaching newcomers Hebrew.  They were reluctantly accepted by those who simply couldn't perform hard, physical work anymore...

Lined face and hands of leather Her body punished by blazing-hot weather She'd worked the fields for 50-plus years Her energy drained, along with the swamps ~For the kibbutz whose ideals she held so dear... Shopworn and spent in her shapeless frock Offered a menial job in a kitchen smock She volunteered to teach immigrants Hebrew instead The time had come to depend on her mind, she said... Her classroom had no board, just tables and chairs Nor was there a breath of fresh air in there The temperature outside nearly one-hundred ten Inside just two fans --Can you imagine? Yet she taught us to converse from the very first In just a month, we could handle most situations We could shop for clothes and order food too Buy tickets for a ride on the bus or in the train station She taught most of us to speak Hebrew fluently Her lessons with our objectives meshed congruently Her name was Tsiporah; it means 'a sweet bird' Her language teaching the sweetest music we'd ever heard October 06, 2019 Favorite Teacher or Professor Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 11/1/2019 11:30:00 PM
A great tribute , Gershon , congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/4/2019 1:38:00 PM
Thank you for such a sweet comment, Eve! Warm wishes Gershon
Date: 10/31/2019 2:09:00 PM
- A teacher who gave so much more ... congratulations on your great winning poem, Gershon - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/31/2019 4:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. And congratulations to you for your heartwarming write about the professor who integrated history and mathematics---and wrapped it all up with the gift of music! Your last few lines there inspired me to write the poem, 'In the Key of Life,' which I just posted a few minutes ago. Thank you so much! (See soup mail too, please). Warmest wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/9/2019 9:32:00 PM
Hello Gershon … a story like you wrote is worth telling and listening to. People like Tsiporah are really the salt of the earth and they do live a full life - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:40:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay, for commenting appreciatively about this remarkable teacher and women. Blessings, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2019 8:36:00 PM
A lovely tribute, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2019 8:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. Tsiporah was a great teacher, and an incredible human being. Appreciate your encouragement. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2019 7:02:00 PM
to leave you penning such a beautiful poem in her honor she must have been a great teacher....great poem my friend, beautifully penned :) hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2019 7:37:00 PM
Unimaginably good, this teacher was. No formal schooling beyond age 14 either. She was a 'pioneer' of the Kibbutz I mentioned. 95% of her 'comrades' either died or returned to Russia after working a few months of 18-hour days draining swamps in primitive conditions. She was tough as nails, but with the heart and mind of a great educator. Whew! ~ Gershon
Date: 10/6/2019 4:31:00 PM
A wonderful teacher indeed...and a heart felt write too...Well done mt friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2019 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo! She was quite a teacher, quite an inspirational person. ~ Gershon

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