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A Surreal Dream

Lightning flashes, followed by thunderclaps, dominate the scene, dispersing the crowds. And the night sky's twinkling stars stay hidden behind prodigious banks of sullied clouds. Brisk breezes tussle the tops of the trees; branches bending as the wind increases. And a mixture of rain, sleet, and hailstones tears loose leaves into fragmented pieces. Ebony shadows merge with the darkness when Lightning's fiery gaze burns its way through. And as raindrops dim Lightning's jagged eye, Thor's magic hammer forges sparks anew. A part of Nature's natural array: thunderstorms feel like a surreal dream. For when Lightning's hypnotic flash ignites: amidst the charcoal clouds, wailing banshees scream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 3:53 AM
Your outstanding imagery captivates Emile! I loved your reference to Neptune which is what I also imagine when I see lightening. Congratulations on being on this short winner's list. This is a top winner for me! : )
Pinet Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Thanks Connie, as always your comments pick me up and encourage me my friend, Emile.
Brewer Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Striking, original images well combined with poetic skill, deserving a higher place in this contest. Well written, Emile
Pinet Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Thanks Geoffrey, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery made me feel every line...
Pinet Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Eve, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:44 PM
A wonderful quatrain,....and the image it has stirred up is perfect ! Well deserved congratulations to your poem !
Pinet Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Carrie, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Tripp Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations, Emile on your contest placement.
Pinet Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Rhoda, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Back with most deserving congrats, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Poteet Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:16 PM
congratulations, Emile. Your expressive way with words shines here, in particular I like the jagged eye of lightning and the slow motion/rising cream. Great imagery you bring to mind.
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thanks, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Fantastic, Emile. I don't know how I missed this one of yours. A well deserved win. Congrats to you.
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Thanks Andrea, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Michael Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 3:51 PM
You made me smile with this one..."silent as rising cream."
Pinet Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Thanks Arturo, your comments always make me smile my friend, Emile.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Fantastic pen! Love the use of mythology. My best to you in the contest! xomo
Pinet Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Thank you Maureen, your comments always make me smile my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Awesome, Emile. The imagery is fabulous.
Pinet Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate it my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Wow, great imagery in this poem.. Really took me there.. Great entry for the contest..
Pinet Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Thanks Silent One, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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