Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

A Super Highway In My Front Yard

I have a superhighway in my front yard. 
It appeared in the night. 
As if by magic. 
Ants are traveling along it 
Whistling a tune I think it is a Maroon 5 song 
But I am not sure 
Some say I should get rid of it. 
I am fascinated by it a superhighways 
Begun with one giant wad 
Of pink gum.
Ant traveled

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M. L. Kiser March 13, 2019 at 2:07 AM Another, "Fav". Caren Krutsinger March 13, 2019 at 7:25 AM Thank you M.L. I kind of boxed myself into a corner and had to march my way out Two by Two.

Panagiota Romios March 12, 2019 at 6:28 PM Yes! What a great way to see them. Ants so plentiful here. They are clever Panagiota Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2019 at 8:52 PM Ants so rapidly find things like a wad of gum, parading toward it in such a stream! Surrounding it, making it black quickly.

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2019 at 6:09 PM so creative. Love how you "see" things, sweetie!! Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2019 at 8:52 PM Thank you Andrea. Trixie is all excited whirling and twirling with blatant HAHA ness from your comment.

Tom Cunningham March 12, 2019 at 1:36 PM As long as they don't grow as big as THEM ( remember that film ) Tom Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2019 at 8:53 PM I do not remember that film, but not I want to, Tom.

Rhona Mcferran March 12, 2019 at 12:49 PM As long as they stay OUTSIDE, ant are fascinating! ;) (Still shuddering a little, thinking of my weeks-long home invasion...) Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2019 at 8:54 PM I shudder thinking rather of my 'Asian beetle' invasion where I was scraping tens of thousands of them off a bedroom ceiling, and they crawled the walls faster than I could scrape them up.

James Edward Lee Sr. March 12, 2019 at 11:21 AM This is the ant verse you were talking about.... We better stop thinking of the same themes or our fellow poets will think we're the same person Ha! Ha! ~LOL~ write on.. love the piece James Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2019 at 12:14 PM Hilarious! It is strange to me that our ideas are similar on the same day, my friend.