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A Super Highway In My Front Yard

I have a superhighway in my front yard. It appeared in the night. As if by magic. Ants are traveling along it Whistling a tune I think it is a Maroon 5 song But I am not sure Some say I should get rid of it. I am fascinated by it a superhighways Begun with one giant wad Of pink gum. Ant traveled

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/13/2019 2:07:00 AM

Another, "Fav".

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/13/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank you M.L. I kind of boxed myself into a corner and had to march my way out Two by Two.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/12/2019 6:28:00 PM

Yes! What a great way to see them. Ants so plentiful here. They are clever Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:52:00 PM

Ants so rapidly find things like a wad of gum, parading toward it in such a stream! Surrounding it, making it black quickly.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2019 6:09:00 PM

so creative. Love how you "see" things, sweetie!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:52:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Trixie is all excited whirling and twirling with blatant HAHA ness from your comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2019 1:36:00 PM

As long as they don't grow as big as THEM ( remember that film ) Tom

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:53:00 PM

I do not remember that film, but not I want to, Tom.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 3/12/2019 12:49:00 PM

As long as they stay OUTSIDE, ant are fascinating! ;) (Still shuddering a little, thinking of my weeks-long home invasion...)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:54:00 PM

I shudder thinking rather of my 'Asian beetle' invasion where I was scraping tens of thousands of them off a bedroom ceiling, and they crawled the walls faster than I could scrape them up.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 3/12/2019 11:21:00 AM

This is the ant verse you were talking about.... We better stop thinking of the same themes or our fellow poets will think we're the same person Ha! Ha! ~LOL~ write on.. love the piece James

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 12:14:00 PM

Hilarious! It is strange to me that our ideas are similar on the same day, my friend.