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A Super Highway in My Front Yard

I have a superhighway in my front yard. It appeared in the night. As if by magic. Ants are traveling along it Whistling a tune I think it is a Maroon 5 song But I am not sure Some say I should get rid of it. I am fascinated by it a superhighways Begun with one giant wad Of pink gum. Ant traveled

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Date: 3/13/2019 2:07:00 AM
Another, "Fav".
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/13/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you M.L. I kind of boxed myself into a corner and had to march my way out Two by Two.
Date: 3/12/2019 6:28:00 PM
Yes! What a great way to see them. Ants so plentiful here. They are clever Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:52:00 PM
Ants so rapidly find things like a wad of gum, parading toward it in such a stream! Surrounding it, making it black quickly.
Date: 3/12/2019 6:09:00 PM
so creative. Love how you "see" things, sweetie!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Trixie is all excited whirling and twirling with blatant HAHA ness from your comment.
Date: 3/12/2019 1:36:00 PM
As long as they don't grow as big as THEM ( remember that film ) Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:53:00 PM
I do not remember that film, but not I want to, Tom.
Date: 3/12/2019 12:49:00 PM
As long as they stay OUTSIDE, ant are fascinating! ;) (Still shuddering a little, thinking of my weeks-long home invasion...)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 8:54:00 PM
I shudder thinking rather of my 'Asian beetle' invasion where I was scraping tens of thousands of them off a bedroom ceiling, and they crawled the walls faster than I could scrape them up.
Date: 3/12/2019 11:21:00 AM
This is the ant verse you were talking about.... We better stop thinking of the same themes or our fellow poets will think we're the same person Ha! Ha! ~LOL~ write on.. love the piece James
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 12:14:00 PM
Hilarious! It is strange to me that our ideas are similar on the same day, my friend.