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a sunset hiku

sun s e t s scarlet as we s t r o l l the green glen . . . n the luminous m. o o

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/14/2025 9:54:00 AM

charming ~

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/4/2025 7:23:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Brian`s contest with a lovely write on the scarlet sunset,. Awesome. Wish you a pleasant day.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/3/2025 12:17:00 PM

Unlike other hiku, that I refer to as hiccups, I can clearly read yours, Andrea. Well done.

Ink Empress

Date: 6/3/2025 10:03:00 AM

How beautiful sweet andrea! Love the luminous moon and the way youv arranged words! Congratulations on your win! Well deserved

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/3/2025 7:05:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your fantastic haiku, my friend. Congratulations on your contest top win.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/3/2025 5:44:00 AM

Wonderful and creative hiku.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/3/2025 5:21:00 AM

These hiku makes me cross=eyed. Wish I could stroll in that angelic paradise.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/3/2025 3:38:00 AM

Oh, what a creative and beautiful haiku this is, dear Andrea! I love also how you've presented your words, feels so artistic and alluring to read!! "sun sets scarlet as we stroll the green glen" How mesmerizing this is and the alliterative flow is so soothing throughout... love the way you've depicted the rising moon as well. Brilliantly done!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/2/2025 7:42:00 PM

Prettiness as my eyes stroll about your hiku!

White Wolf

Date: 6/2/2025 7:21:00 PM

Very creative and well executed.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/2/2025 7:10:00 PM

Could see the moon creeping up on the glen, beautiful poem, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/2/2025 7:15:00 PM

thanks, I hope the circle stays in place. I can't get shapes to stay put and it's so frustrating because I see other people are able to do it.