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A Summer Couplet

Gentle breeze caresses me as I lie down under the sun
little waves tickle my feet making my sunbathing fun.



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Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2013

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Matthew Horstkotter Date: 8/3/2013 5:20:00 AM Sounds like a great place to be. great piece. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/7/2013 10:55:00 AM loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/1/2013 4:54:00 PM nice one, kash! congrats! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/30/2013 4:41:00 PM Sounds so relaxing, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 6/30/2013 4:32:00 PM a nice breezy summery couplet, brings to mind days I've spent on the beach, congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 6/30/2013 3:53:00 PM Wonderful couplet,Kash..Congrats on your win.... Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/30/2013 2:47:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/30/2013 12:08:00 PM great cheers to you for a fine win, kashi... sunbathing keeps you going..:) huggs Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 6/30/2013 12:29:00 AM Summer brings out the kid in all of us, Kash. Congratulations on a fine win! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 6/29/2013 6:08:00 PM Kash, you are describing exactly what I'd like to do.... Great win.... Jake Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/29/2013 3:57:00 PM congrats on a fine win Kash Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/29/2013 3:09:00 PM KASH, Nice and Relaxing beach moment. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/29/2013 1:15:00 PM I can't help but smile reading this one...I want to be under the sun, and feel the breeze too!! And yes......even if it tickles my toes! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/29/2013 8:49:00 AM this was sweet. I had no clue you wrote it, Kash. YOu knew I would love one about sunbathing!! Congrats to you. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/29/2013 8:23:00 AM Fun write too..congrats Kash. BG Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/17/2013 1:32:00 PM kashi, can i ask a favor?.. WRITE another fine work, lol.. hello and huggs..:) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/16/2013 3:15:00 AM Feeling giddy about this delightful work, kashi... is it summer there?... amazing!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 6/15/2013 8:22:00 PM This is a superior, a very wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, such a fun poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 6/15/2013 4:43:00 PM I like the way you made sunbathing a playful activity Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/15/2013 1:23:00 PM :) Oh....I'm a beach baby! LOVE THIS! Lovely, Kash...Glad to reconnect! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/15/2013 12:54:00 PM - Delightful summer .... Beautiful summer couplet, Kash! - Luck in contest!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply