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A Summer Couplet

A bumblebee samples pollen from summer's bazaar As a humming bird hovers for a sip of nectar

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 11:00:00 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2013 12:32:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning couplets..Extraordinary rhyme. Congrats..Sara

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:26:00 PM

Joseph, lovely imagery. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 2:01:00 PM

Lovely couplet here Joseph.Congrats on your win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 1:39:00 PM

We have honeysuckle growing on our arbor......and the scene you describe is happening as we speak!! Love this!!

John Posey

Date: 6/29/2013 3:34:00 AM

great intentions can overcome many issues... Great write... Congrats... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2013 12:31:00 AM

oops. I didn't know whose was whose. I wish someone had told you that you left off bird for humming bird, but I knew what you meant so included it on the winners' list. Sweet poem for my contest, Joseph. thanks for the support. and congratulations.

Joseph May
Date: 6/29/2013 3:45:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement Andrea...I don't know how I missed that.... I have corrected it .....thanks again....love

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/15/2013 7:43:00 PM

This is an outstanding couplet. I love 'summer's bazaar', clever! Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2013 12:04:00 PM

- Yes ... It's summer! - Beautiful summer couplet, Joseph! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 6/15/2013 4:11:00 PM

thank you Anne