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A Stupid Fly

A stupid fly tried to swim In my glass filled with a beer But finally the beast made it to the rim And when flying away it showed me its rear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/13/2011 11:02:00 AM
LOL, hilarious! I love this one, Gert : )
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:52:00 PM
hahaha, how did I ever miss this one. Love it!
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Date: 2/21/2011 7:21:00 AM
:) i'm smilin Gert,cheerful and sweet words,alwaysC.C
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:33:00 PM
Funny one Gert..I hope that fly had a buzz on when he left. BG
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Date: 2/20/2011 3:04:00 PM
LOL! Perhaps he didn't mean to. He'd had too much, Gert! lol Glad to see you here. I enjoyed this very much! Have a good week! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/20/2011 12:42:00 PM
haha..oh Gert ..a lovely sense of humor in this write and the visual is keen luv.. wonder did that fly ..fly in the right direction after drinking the beer ..haha.. wonderful read my friend.. appreciate your sweet comments on my poetry always..with luv..
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Date: 2/20/2011 9:59:00 AM
You painted a witty scenario, dear friend. Flies always get in food and drink when we are eating outdoors here. Perhaps it's the same in Germany. Guess you had to toss out your beer! (They carry germs.) But I did get a laugh, especially from reading your last line. Don't let the fly have the last laugh, however. Protect your beer! LOL Still laughing. Enjoyed very much. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:33:00 AM
Haha, what a very different write from you Gert and I also enjoyed this funny side of you :) I've heard of drunken shrimp, but not drunken flies -- very fun write :) enjoy your Sunday! Alles Gute!
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:19:00 AM
That must have been one beer you did not finish drinking. Good humorous write.
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:09:00 AM
Got a laugh out of this one, Gert. Ser gut. This is about all I know in German other than musical instructions...langsam, things like that. Love, Dave
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