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A Stream of Laughter

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Sunlit water frolics
over a stone-strewn base.
Chattering waters, 
playfully tumbling children 
on a high hill, rolling down.

Both translucent and opaque
blues and greens magnified
by reflection, slice-cut by refraction,
laved with a satin-wetness; stones color,
beginning where, ending where;
I am not to know.

High mountain waters
strained of impurities by crystalline sand
gilded purveyors of bountiful imaginings:
leaf boats with twig masts, brilliant red-purple
chiton-backed beetles float, lost sailors.

Sunlit waters dance, smile-seekers,
laughter-breeders; water falls
ever
on.


First Published in Pyrokinections Spring 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/28/2015 10:35:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Date: 5/13/2015 12:32:00 AM
This is so beautiful!! :D :D
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Date: 5/7/2015 7:37:00 PM
Well, Debbie, pay you my highest accolade, you make me envious of this write!!!Excellent poem with great imagery and feeling.
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Date: 4/28/2015 6:18:00 PM
such joyous imagery Debbie... You put me exactly there..... Thank you so much for sharing.. :)!!`olive eloisa
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Date: 4/27/2015 12:04:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one..Good use of free verse..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2015 10:12:00 AM
"Chiton-backed beetles float, lost sailors..." !!! How do I love such descriptions?? !! :) Yes !!
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Date: 4/27/2015 6:55:00 AM
Great write. 7+!
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Date: 4/27/2015 12:01:00 AM
Wow rich in scenes and imagery with great word choices and phrasing. Colours portrayed vividly and poetically. Great to read u again debbs.
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