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A Strange Galaxy

When I gaze into this realm, I see more than the dazzling array of golden starbursts floating in a cosmic sea of blue-green-gray, photoreceptors painting post-Impressionistic explosions of colors, fibers and dilator muscles servicing your ocular aperture. I see distinctive melanin patterns of a truly original individual - a retinal scan of exceptional singularity, each nebula unique, every supernova peculiar, no quasar like any other. I passionately absorb with one brief glance an infinity of nuance, an eternity of historical archives, a heaven and earth of emotional journeys. I am reading your autobiography, the encyclopedia of you. I remain a student of your sclera, a pupil of your pupils, a Vincent of your irises, going half-mad with the dizzying vastness of the starry night within your eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/24/2023 8:20:00 AM
Another winning write from you, John. I've always admired your way of stating your thoughts with such panache' and fine vocabulary.
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Date: 1/23/2023 11:52:00 AM
This is wonderful, John. Very well done!
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Date: 1/22/2023 3:17:00 PM
Amazing write... The inspiration for a breathlessness that stirs the soul - beautiful, God bless you friend. Congrats to you, too, Love, Gina
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Date: 1/22/2023 1:08:00 PM
I'll echo Andrea's words - John, you chose a poem to blow me away. Your first stanza is incredible, and each subsequent stanza takes it higher. An interstellar love poem. The eyes have it! A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your third-place podium finish on Mile 24 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Two more miles to run before the Qualifier's Final Placement Contest!
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Date: 1/22/2023 10:25:00 AM
wow, you did it, John, you chose a poem to blow Mark away. Big congratulations to you on a pedestal win.
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Date: 1/17/2022 7:56:00 PM
Amazing poem, John! Another fave…wow!
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John Watt
Date: 3/19/2022 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, my poetry friend and sister! Your appreciation means a great deal to me ~ John
Date: 11/17/2021 11:50:00 PM
Wow! this is simply outstanding, John, beyond beautiful and so unique in its language and depth:) love your writings always:)
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John Watt
Date: 11/24/2021 5:51:00 PM
You are a poet I admire and enjoy so much, Jo. Words like these coming from you are a double blessing. Thank you, and God bless ~ John
Date: 11/3/2020 6:23:00 AM
John, an exceptional write. You are a standout here on the soup.
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John Watt
Date: 11/3/2020 11:15:00 AM
Very kind of you to visit an older one, James. I value your writing, and thus your comment carries extra weight and is greatly appreciated ~ John
Date: 10/30/2020 12:51:00 PM
Wow John! First let me welcome you to the lifer club my friend. I myself, just recently became a member. This poem speaks for itself, filling in the gaps opened by imagination, it offers the reader a succulent sample of your artistic skill as a poet, and it is delicious!... full of metaphors and engaging imagery. Very well done!
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Date: 10/30/2020 12:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend. I can chew on this comment the rest of the day. Your words are very affirming, and coming from a poet I admire greatly, they are doubly welcomed. Your friend, John
Date: 8/4/2020 10:30:00 PM
Awesome poem, I particularly loved every line of the last stanza ~ bravo
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John Watt
Date: 8/8/2020 12:51:00 PM
Line, thank you very much for your insightful comment that will help me in future writing.
Date: 6/6/2020 6:42:00 PM
Congrats on a win and a great write.
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jeanne. Much appreciated ~ John
Date: 6/6/2020 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. The galaxy has so much for us to still learn about. Enjoy your win and day.........
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 3:48:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and thoughtful comment, Paula. I still can't wrap my mind around the concept of an infinite universe. Blessings, my friend ~ John
Date: 6/6/2020 11:54:00 AM
More adulation for this "all star" write dear friend! So happy to see it rise up to the top of the sky like the morning star! Beautiful creativity on top of the podium! So deserving! A fav for me. Blessings!
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, for the continuing support. This one was kind of a stretch outside my comfort zone and usual style. Tip of the cap to "Stretch" McCovey. Have a great day, Sam!
Date: 6/6/2020 2:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your # 1. What a fascinating Supernova of creativity, that reflects on your autobiography as well. I think your star power is well intact, and waiting for your next mission! Take care.
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 3:27:00 AM
Thank you kindly, sir. It's nice to meet you here at Soup, I shall have to check out a poem or two of yours real soon.
Date: 6/6/2020 1:18:00 AM
I love this one, John, for that is the most mysterious and compelling Universe that exists ... and one we can never completely know, (thus, its dark energy pulls us) ... excellent write, Dear Poet! Blessings and congrats! :o) (Fave-ing)
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John Watt
Date: 6/6/2020 1:25:00 AM
Thank you, Bard. You know your affirmations mean the world to me. Blessings ~ John
Date: 3/10/2020 3:11:00 PM
Wow, such exciting stanzas of brilliance, John! This is going into my faves! :D
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John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 2:18:00 PM
I'm honored by the fave, and your enthusiastic poetry friendship. Have a blessed day, Laura.
Date: 3/9/2020 6:37:00 PM
That last stanza is brilliant! Congrats!
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John Watt
Date: 9/22/2020 9:36:00 PM
Thank you very much L.J. That means a lot.
Date: 3/9/2020 4:35:00 PM
Hey John - Congratulations! I knew this would be a winner the first time I read it! And I enjoyed all over again.
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Date: 3/9/2020 5:16:00 PM
And I loved reading your winner over again, too! Thanks for the supportive encouragement ~ John
Date: 3/8/2020 7:37:00 AM
This is wonderful stuff, John, and I'm adding to my faves - love the phrasing and imagery, a superb analogy. More like this, please! One of your best that I've read. Blessings.
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Date: 3/8/2020 10:25:00 PM
Bard, this was strangely inspired by Craig's admonition in his contest notes: "DON'T BE SIMPLE, TEDIOUS OR PREDICTABLE WITH YOUR POEM". I felt like I needed to up my game. Sincere thanks for your enthusiastic appreciation and the fave! John
Date: 3/6/2020 5:34:00 PM
What an exceptional piece. Very intriguing... very creative. Thank you for your visits.
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Date: 3/6/2020 6:26:00 PM
Nice to hear from you, Eileen. Thank you for the read and the uplifting words. It's good to see poetry flowing from your talented pen again ~ John
Date: 3/6/2020 12:01:00 AM
This is so wonderful John! I'm going to have to read it several times to fully take in all of your images. I love the blending of scientific terms and poetry! Good luck in the contest! Wonderful write.
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Date: 3/6/2020 1:11:00 AM
Thank you kindly for your thoughtfulness, Sam. You know I value your judgment highly. ~ John
Date: 3/5/2020 8:26:00 PM
wow, so deep and so creative, John. I never would have gotten that from the crannied wall theme. this is indeed an example of thinking outside the box and taking your message to the next level. I did not even know some of the words, so you used some awesome vocabulary in this one as well. I sure do hope this does well for you.
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John Watt
Date: 3/6/2020 1:09:00 AM
Very kind of you to say, Andrea. See my soupmail ~ John

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