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A Storm is Brewing

A storm is brewing Everybody is aware Soup appears silent Something is gonna take it by a storm A storm is brewing The contest is prestigious Everyone wants to be a winner All have sharpened the arsenals The backdoor war has already begun A storm is brewing Linda says I am the number one One knows how to get the job 'Silent'ly done Broken has strengthened her Wings Tim says I participate for a win Andrea ,Casarah are not a step behind BL says I am God of Gods, Devnath Everybody says take it easy But I can see all of them busy CayCay ,Pandita say our age, experience is advantage Little Hansteven is bold enough to perform on a bigger stage Victor has vowed to emerge victorious T.J. has got his own flavor All are set to do their best No one wants to leave any stone unturned This storm is going to do a world of good Some are going to noticed as lightening blaze in the dark skies, Some are going to heard as crashing thunder booms Some are going give double delight of echoes at quiet night This storm is gonna leave it's marks It is gonna connect lot many hearts The storm is gonna give people sleepless nights Good part is after the storm there won't be any fights Wish this storm to hit soup frequently It will challenge people's abilities Now that it's official ,A storm is brewing I can't stop my self , I am also participating A storm is brewing A storm is brewing

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Date: 12/6/2017 3:09:00 PM
coming back to your BEST poem at Soup. Congrats for this one being top of your list of best poetry!!
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Date: 5/10/2017 11:02:00 AM
I just read this again for the third time and I must say that this one is a great way to show other people what PoetrySoup really is. I'm flattered to know that despite my age, I can also be in a bigger stage. Thank you for the nice appreciation. :D
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Date: 4/12/2017 12:52:00 AM
Its a fine work.contests are inspirations to do better.
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:35:00 AM
An excellent poem, my friend. I loved the way you've used the names of some of the very active gallants on PS. They have always been a source of inspiration by their encouragement and hosting of contests. May there be many such storms. You have raised a veritable whirlwind with your poem. ~karam~
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Date: 5/26/2016 1:12:00 PM
A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share
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Date: 5/14/2016 12:00:00 AM
This poem is very good, Anand. Your unique take on the theme really captured my attention and likely would have placed in my contest... Keep up the great work! I hope to see you in my contests in the future.
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:27:00 PM
Well this sure was a creative pen, Anand. A cleansing storm I hope it will be ... there is a little wiggle room for interpretation here. "Tim says I participate for a win" ... there's quite a few different Tims on this site, so I'm curious who you are referring too ... lol. My own personal views about contests ... I of course like to win just as much as the next guy, but what I really love is the inspiration the contests give me. So even if I don't place, I aim to write something I'm proud of.
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/28/2016 11:15:00 AM
Hi Timothy...Thanks for your encouraging comments..... There are at least 4 Tims I know including you. and Tim Smith.... It was a virtual situation in the poem...I agree with your views that these contests should inspire us to excel rather than defeating others....
Date: 4/25/2016 1:30:00 AM
What an excellent write...how come I never discovered you here...Glad that I read your brilliant work...You are a poet who knows how to give perfection to his poetry...A7....Cheers...red
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/25/2016 10:13:00 AM
Thank you for the complement and appreciation my dear friend....
Date: 4/23/2016 4:04:00 PM
Very imaginative and well constructed poem! I see you already have made a lot of friends and you are ready to put your fine talent into a test. Do not worry if this time you have missed the deadline for many more storms will be brewing in the future and I will not be surprise that you will be a winner many a time! Welcome to the family and good luck my new friend! A seven!
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/23/2016 9:14:00 PM
Hey Dem..Thank you for stopping by and for your wonderful encouraging comments...
Date: 4/23/2016 3:39:00 PM
Wow! what a nice storm it is! Now i am clear from your beautiful poem that really a storm is brewing upon us. Lol, you are cute. Good luck in the contest. 7 for warming us with your poem. Loved always, bl
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/23/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thank you BL... I was missing your comments for a while which really count for me....
Date: 4/22/2016 11:01:00 AM
Anand, Great writing. A storm is brewing in all great thought. I appreciate your selection and loved the way you explained the situation lively.Deepak Chalise.
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Date: 4/22/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and encouraging comments,Deepak
Date: 4/22/2016 12:15:00 AM
ooh, what kind of storm??? I'm intrigued... Love it, Anand.. LINDA
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Date: 4/22/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thank you for your pleasant visit . I am glad you liked it..
Date: 4/21/2016 9:36:00 PM
Anand, this is absolutely wonderful, of course I adore the line," Broken has strengthened her wings " I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:40:00 PM
Hey thanks Constance....I was missing your comments for a while.... You have merry time....
Date: 4/21/2016 9:09:00 PM
gosh, ARnand. This is really CREATIVE thinking and wonderfully done. I really like your poem here. So glad I finally am seeing it. Thanks for seeing my poems. I wish I had more time to see more of yours but i have to hurry and get hubbie's dinner going very soon. Hopefully can see more of your work tomorrow.
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea.... Time is constraint for all of us...Still I know how keen you are to read my work and how you always encourage a new poet like me...Your comments really count for me.. Thank you for being such wonderful friend and making my day....
Date: 4/21/2016 9:09:00 PM
sorry if you missed the contest. I was just starting to write and found out this one was over.
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/22/2016 8:00:00 AM
Sorry to hear you missed one.I missed Linda's and Kelly's contests I badly wanted to participate...
Date: 4/20/2016 2:00:00 PM
- Many famous faces in your storm :)) - A wonderful poem! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/22/2016 11:37:00 PM
Thank you dear Anne
Date: 4/20/2016 1:13:00 PM
Very nice! I think this contest is over...
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/20/2016 1:20:00 PM
I wasn't aware
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/20/2016 1:19:00 PM
Thanks for your comments Meenakshi....Unfortunately yes....I wan't aware.....