Notes About The Poem

A Storm Is Brewing

A storm is brewing as the wind hastens,
the darkening troposphere trembles
with the tornado's teeming tempest afar.
Cumulonimbus clouds meet, gathering to 
brood, to share their destructive morose 
mood, just as he did that fearful, fateful night
as his friends gathered about taunting him.
This would be no ordinary storm, but a deadly
terrorizing storm exceeding all previous storms.

As the tornado strikes, Hades is awakened
to rise up with Cerberus at his side to
meet the onslaught of obliteration and
blood spilled and spattered with a frenzied
unrelenting wind force exceeding 100 mph.
The house destroyed, his family winging
their way toward heaven's golden gates,
there would be no rendering of redemption.

As the tornado became weak and dissipated,
spent from spinning and swirling its wrath,
its path of decimation and destruction lay
bare with the departed and hard hearted who
cast his lot and became besot to spend his
final unremorseful days of hate with Hades.

April 18, 2016


*Hades was lord of the underworld and ruler of the dead 
in Greek mythology.

*Cerberus was the three-headed guard dog belonging to Hades.

To read more about Hades: 
http://www.greekmythology.com/Olympians/Hades/hades.html

Note* This poem parallels the wrath and destruction
of a tornado with a man who goes berserk and, during 
a frenzied rampage, kills his entire family.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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DiMino Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Emphasizing the connection between the elements and human temperament. This is brilliant work, Connie! Outstanding, riveting read!
Mandani Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 9:48 AM
I like your take on the storm. Full of imagery. You did pretty good here.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 2:10 AM
Thank you very much Abdul. Kind of dark for me though. ; )
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Rich imagery which arrests our attention!! Congrats Connie, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 2:29 AM
Thank you very much Teddy. I was surprised to get such a high placement with all the awesome entries. ; )
Cheema Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 5:06 AM
A very scholarly write, Connie! Congrats on your beautiful win,
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Thank you very much Balveen. ; )
May Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Congrats on a fine win Connie
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:41 AM
Thank you very much Joseph. I am soooo far behind with comments. I appreciate everyone who is faster than I am with my comments. It is my ADD that makes me so scattered. Cheers, Connie
Carmack Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Connie, I liked how you weaved this poem and the sad & absolute fate of the man. Congrats on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:40 AM
Thank you very much Rob. I usually don't write dark poetry, but just felt the comparison of the two. ; )
Smith Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Back to say I told you so, congratulations...
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Okay...I give...you were right! lol. Thank again Charlie. It is hard to judge my own work. ; )
Negron Flores Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Congratulations Connie on the placement of the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Thank you very much Nayda. ; )
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Hi, Connie, stopping back to congratulate you on your wonderful placement in the 'storm' contest for your outstanding poem! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:30 AM
Thanks a lot Sandra. ; )
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:59 PM
You got top honors Sandra! I am happy to be in the top three. Thank you Sandra. Cheers, Connie ; )
Deschler Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:22 PM
I liked your darker take on the contest theme. This poem stood out from the rest with it's powerful metaphors... Really great writing, Connie! Congrats on a win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Oh, thank you very much for my high placement in your contest Kelly. You had some awesome entries. Mahalo, Connie ; )
Inman Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Great metaphor for the horrors of insanity Connie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Thank you James. I rarely go to the dark side but the destructive nature of the storm had me drawing a parallel. ; )
Daniel Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 4:53 AM
Awesome parallels drawn in your poem:) All the best:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Thank you very much Jo. : )
Laurie Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Hello Connie ... you have certainly blended two violent confrontations from different perspectives well. Thank you Connie - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:04 PM
Thank you Lindsay...both kill however I think I would want to be in the tornado. ; )
Haight Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Very intense, Connie, and full of descriptive imagery that parallels the wrath of nature and man. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Thank you Sandra. I rarely write anything dark like this one. Hugs, Connie : )
Pettit Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Very descriptive and intense. This is one storm I would never want to see.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 8:55 PM
I notice other ladies comparing the two as well, in their entries. Thank you Robert. : )
Smith Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Great job Connie, I'm sure you'll enjoy a high placement in the contest, best wishes...
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 4:01 PM
I have no idea what she is looking for, but with all the tornados that have plagued the USA this year this came to me. Thank you for your words of encouragement. ; )
Scars Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Connie, perfect for the contest! Good luck :)-luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Luloo. I don't usually write dark poetry. ; )
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