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A storm is brewing as the wind hastens, the darkening troposphere trembles with the tornado's teeming tempest afar. Cumulonimbus clouds meet, gathering to brood, to share their destructive morose mood, just as he did that fearful, fateful night as his friends gathered about taunting him. This would be no ordinary storm, but a deadly terrorizing storm exceeding all previous storms. As the tornado strikes, Hades is awakened to rise up with Cerberus at his side to meet the onslaught of obliteration and blood spilled and spattered with a frenzied unrelenting wind force exceeding 100 mph. The house destroyed, his family winging their way toward heaven's golden gates, there would be no rendering of redemption. As the tornado became weak and dissipated, spent from spinning and swirling its wrath, its path of decimation and destruction lay bare with the departed and hard hearted who cast his lot and became besot to spend his final unremorseful days of hate with Hades. April 18, 2016 *Hades was lord of the underworld and ruler of the dead in Greek mythology. *Cerberus was the three-headed guard dog belonging to Hades. To read more about Hades: http://www.greekmythology.com/Olympians/Hades/hades.html Note* This poem parallels the wrath and destruction of a tornado with a man who goes berserk and, during a frenzied rampage, kills his entire family.

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Date: 10/9/2016 3:33:00 PM
Emphasizing the connection between the elements and human temperament. This is brilliant work, Connie! Outstanding, riveting read!
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Date: 5/18/2016 9:48:00 AM
I like your take on the storm. Full of imagery. You did pretty good here.
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Date: 5/19/2016 2:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Abdul. Kind of dark for me though. ; )
Date: 5/18/2016 7:10:00 AM
Rich imagery which arrests our attention!! Congrats Connie, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/19/2016 2:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Teddy. I was surprised to get such a high placement with all the awesome entries. ; )
Date: 5/17/2016 5:06:00 AM
A very scholarly write, Connie! Congrats on your beautiful win,
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Date: 5/17/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Balveen. ; )
Date: 5/16/2016 10:42:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Connie
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Date: 5/17/2016 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph. I am soooo far behind with comments. I appreciate everyone who is faster than I am with my comments. It is my ADD that makes me so scattered. Cheers, Connie
Date: 5/16/2016 8:57:00 PM
Connie, I liked how you weaved this poem and the sad & absolute fate of the man. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/17/2016 1:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Rob. I usually don't write dark poetry, but just felt the comparison of the two. ; )
Date: 5/15/2016 11:05:00 PM
Back to say I told you so, congratulations...
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Date: 5/15/2016 11:55:00 PM
Okay...I give...you were right! lol. Thank again Charlie. It is hard to judge my own work. ; )
Date: 5/15/2016 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations Connie on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/15/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thank you very much Nayda. ; )
Date: 5/15/2016 10:39:00 PM
Hi, Connie, stopping back to congratulate you on your wonderful placement in the 'storm' contest for your outstanding poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 1:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sandra. ; )
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Date: 5/15/2016 11:59:00 PM
You got top honors Sandra! I am happy to be in the top three. Thank you Sandra. Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 5/15/2016 9:22:00 PM
I liked your darker take on the contest theme. This poem stood out from the rest with it's powerful metaphors... Really great writing, Connie! Congrats on a win!
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:24:00 PM
Oh, thank you very much for my high placement in your contest Kelly. You had some awesome entries. Mahalo, Connie ; )
Date: 4/28/2016 10:34:00 AM
Great metaphor for the horrors of insanity Connie.
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thank you James. I rarely go to the dark side but the destructive nature of the storm had me drawing a parallel. ; )
Date: 4/23/2016 4:53:00 AM
Awesome parallels drawn in your poem:) All the best:)
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Date: 4/23/2016 10:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Jo. : )
Date: 4/19/2016 7:02:00 PM
Hello Connie ... you have certainly blended two violent confrontations from different perspectives well. Thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 4/23/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay...both kill however I think I would want to be in the tornado. ; )
Date: 4/18/2016 5:23:00 PM
Very intense, Connie, and full of descriptive imagery that parallels the wrath of nature and man. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/18/2016 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I rarely write anything dark like this one. Hugs, Connie : )
Date: 4/18/2016 4:35:00 PM
Very descriptive and intense. This is one storm I would never want to see.
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Date: 4/18/2016 8:55:00 PM
I notice other ladies comparing the two as well, in their entries. Thank you Robert. : )
Date: 4/18/2016 12:38:00 PM
Great job Connie, I'm sure you'll enjoy a high placement in the contest, best wishes...
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Date: 4/18/2016 4:01:00 PM
I have no idea what she is looking for, but with all the tornados that have plagued the USA this year this came to me. Thank you for your words of encouragement. ; )
Date: 4/18/2016 10:47:00 AM
Connie, perfect for the contest! Good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 4/18/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Luloo. I don't usually write dark poetry. ; )

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