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A Sting In the Tale Collaboration By 'Jadazzle'

Our eyes met across a crowded room You blew me a kiss and it lifted the gloom Strode over to me and asked me to dance I held on tightly – wasn’t missing this chance The attraction between us now is woken Our eyes conversing the only words spoken I pull you close your shapely bottom I'm clutching Our lips so close though not yet touching. My eyes fall upon your left hand There was a telltale ring sign – I didn’t understand How could you be acting like you were really ‘free’ I don’t want to hear 'my wife doesn’t understand me' There is no ring because I was betrayed If she had been faithful I would have stayed I won't deny it was painful but life is too short for regret Truth I've been seeking and truth I've just met. Well I’ve heard it a thousand times before We’ll end up as lovers then you’ll walk out the door I need a man that I can really trust Not one whose eyes are simply filled with lust It is not lust within my eyes you see But an appreciation of all that could be Feel our hearts beating chest to breast Allow the truth from our hearts put your fears to rest. There is a look of honesty in your big brown eyes I find you so attractive that fact I can't disguise So lets take things slowly it's a chance we cannot miss Out lips lock together in a tender kiss Happy to take things slowly, what need have we of haste I feel I am in heaven with my arms around your waist I swear I almost fainted when we sat down on the bench You reveal your inner passion with our kisses turning French. Just as passion is rising my mobile phone it rings I pause so I can answer it and the news it brings My husband he is on his way, oh damn I forgot about him Better dash off my love and forget this night of sin. 6th May 2014 Written by 'JaDazzle' - Jan Allison and Darren Watson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2014 5:20:00 PM
Hi Jan, great poem! Particularly loved the kisses turning French line and the twist. :) Alex
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/7/2014 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Alex. Darren and I really hit it off on our first collaboration poem - this is about our 7th poem together - they flow so naturally between us verse by verse with little or no alteration. I am so lucky we work so well together . Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/7/2014 2:10:00 PM
What an ending! You had me from start to finish.
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Date: 5/7/2014 2:12:00 PM
Thanks for the awesome comment Richard - I so love writing with Darren the verses just flow with no alteration - love the twist at the end of this one. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/7/2014 11:03:00 AM
Hi Jan, My friend:~) What a sheer pleasure this was to read!!! You have accomplished!! A BIG GRIN:~) Outstanding to the both of you!! Thanks for sharing this with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/7/2014 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Deborah I love working with Darren the poems flow so smoothly and we have such fun when we write. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/7/2014 6:34:00 AM
A sheer pleasure as always but I notice I end up in the cold shower again ,
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:19:00 AM
LOL I didn't realise it was written about you Darren otherwise the ending would have been totally different! Hugs Jan x
Date: 5/6/2014 4:44:00 PM
Bravo... so much fun to read... awesome writing... I can tell you hd fun with this... good luck in the contest Jan.. Brooke
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2014 4:53:00 PM
Its not for any contest Brooke we simply collaborate for fun. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/6/2014 3:43:00 PM
Applause!!! This is terrific! You two did awesome I can't wait to read more!!!! :)
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Date: 5/6/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Casarah - just seen your poem with Tim simply beautiful! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/6/2014 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful with a nice twist at the end..gave me a chuckle...keep the saga coming...I'm hooked.....hugs Tim
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Date: 5/6/2014 3:09:00 PM
Thanks Tim for the lovely comments. We do have another poem in the pipeline :-) Hugs Jan xx

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