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A Star Says Human

"Do you listen? I am a star I watch you all, though I am far For centuries, are in my view Whate'er different people do I know the world with no human No religion, race or slogan Water was blue and land was green The face of earth was crystal clean My friend, the Sun, was proud of earth Before it gave, to human, birth Human came with destruction plans Race, wealth, norms, frauds, oppression, clans Where strong are masters, weak are slaves Who have no life, rights, shrouds and graves Where arrows pierced human backs In wars; brutal, fatal attacks Where color decides high and low Downtrodden have no right to glow Where so many were cut like cakes In name of God, rev' and mistakes Where of needy, no one takes care Man is in dark, and there's no flare Where Jack sleeps in Kin's spousal bed When Jack's on work, his wife is red Where beauty sleeps in arms of wealth Whose every smile is just a stealth Where dad can't feed his kids with pray Where taxes are more than his pay Where ideologies make a mess Which cannot help someone in stress Where commune, social, populist The way of peace, always resist Where freedom means the right to cheat Where the same robbers just repeat Where statistics are kept in dark As to public rage, they can spark Where all your thoughts follow a streak And everything, I cannot speak."

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Date: 2/20/2022 9:18:00 AM
Brilliant!
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Nazim Zarsinner
Date: 7/2/2022 11:29:00 AM
Thanks for appreciation my kind friend
Date: 2/18/2022 4:46:00 PM
Well written
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Nazim Zarsinner
Date: 7/2/2022 11:29:00 AM
Thanks for appreciation my kind friend
Date: 2/18/2022 4:28:00 PM
allowances and reasons distort as much as they rationalizes... immense passion is relatable. nicely done...
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Nazim Zarsinner
Date: 7/2/2022 11:30:00 AM
Thanks for appreciation my kind friend
Date: 2/13/2022 9:38:00 AM
A lot here Nazim, man left to his own devices ? Is it as simple as just that? There will always be Struggles, I think it better to strive with our own Areas of detriment-ality.) Yet maintaining Strength so as not to agree with others just to Be liked.' & statistics' are we talking accredited Ones.? Proven..? Thanks for posting.'
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Nazim Zarsinner
Date: 7/2/2022 11:28:00 AM
Sometimes statistics are used to mislead people, religions divided humanity, man's lust for women and wealth made him discontented and it's intensity brought wars. Thanks for appreciation

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