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A Star Called Love

When the stars were shining brightly And the moon was full of hope 'Twas then your love departed And your heart began to roam And when the sun had risen And your lover kissed your lips My heart was in a prison The bars with tears did drip But when all the stars had fallen And the moon was left to mourn 'Twas then I saw you weeping Brokenhearted and forlorn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/16/2014 6:30:00 PM
A brilliant offering that expresses a sadness so deep that the angels having once read must surely gasp and weep! Bravo!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:41:00 PM
oh my, I am the first to comment on this one?? Gosh, it's so pretty and forlorn, this little love poem. I much enjoyed it.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/16/2014 6:28:00 PM
You are first but certainly not the last. Its so beautiful and so very expressive of extremely deep sadness!

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