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A Square Peg

...inspired by 'The Average' by W.H. Auden From scant beginnings, and of lowly birth, bound to tractor pull and harvester, squinting in the sun and pouring rain, imagination lost, his soul would fester. Smothered by his parents' love, he saw no future plan, his for the taking, how could he repay their strong affection, find his own true path? his heart was breaking. With no connections off he went to college, wit insufficient for the trials ahead, apprehensive as to how his time be spent. Surrounded by a higher breed he felt displaced; too much for this young country lad to bear, to be anywhere but there, he didn't care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/5/2015 8:14:00 AM
Dear Keith - "Wit insufficient" -- love, love, love. Thank you for your comment on Arthur. Oh boy, I just can't seem to get to it with the poetry - slothful I'm afraid. I'm really out of the writing loop. My nephew is just finishing up at a fancy prep school. He went like a mule digging in. His dad bucking as well. I went for grandmother's day (honor). Very kind of freaky and perfect looking. Not sure about the peg in the hole thing. He does say he's never met such nice adults.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/6/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thanks AGAIN!!! Please get in touch... as soon as you're feeling up to it. Love, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/5/2015 8:30:00 AM
Hi Kathryn! Lovely to hear from you... even though you're not writing PLEASE stay in touch! I miss our 'conversations.' Love, Keith

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