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A Spring Sonata

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March.5.2024
Spring Sonata Poetry Contest
Sponsor- JCB. Brul

 

After the misty snow, with the sun’s Aurelian caress, Men get out of their homes to feel the kiss of the early beams The air is now resonant with avian chatter. Jungles echo the joys of untrammelled life, As birds and animals have reclaimed their space There is a newness as sprouts appear on every tree. Daffodils and tulips push through the crust of the earth. Their delicate petals unfold one by one, As the breeze at dawn nudges them flirtatiously. Fields of wildflowers stretch endlessly. Oh, what a beatific lovely sight! Verdant leaves flutter in sweet murmurs Which can be heard only by attentive ears. The wind too sings a sweet serenade. The creek that flows down the hill with grace Makes a sweet dulcet sound. A chant builds amid the wavelets of the stream. Life comes alive as musical incantations flow out, From the open beaks of the cuckoo and the thrush. Do you hear as I do the serenade of nature? The warbling of birds, the murmur of winds The babbling of the brooks, the sound of the soft landing Of delicate dew drops on the stretching meadows. As I listen to the symphonies of lovesome spring My soul dances like a dew drop on a rose petal.

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Date: 3/9/2024 3:13:00 PM
The season of spring and it's beautiful maidens make me feel elated. "My soul dances like a dew drop on a rose petal." As it should. I love this piece dear Friend.
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Date: 3/5/2024 2:15:00 PM
Welcome to Spring! This is an uplifting poem. I am happy to read it.
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Date: 3/5/2024 12:15:00 PM
- You describe spring so beautifully, Valsa and it is beautiful ... the most beautiful time of the year ... I love spring ... it is like a song in my ears ... best wishes in the contest ... hugs
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Date: 3/5/2024 11:51:00 AM
this is a poetic masterpiece, dear Valsa. It's a beautiful take for the 'spring sonata' contest. Your words were alive with nature's music and vivid imagery. I especially liked "Verdant leaves flutter in sweet murmurs Which can be heard only by attentive ears" When I venture outside I tune in...and this morning I wonderful sonata of which you described in your poem greeted me. Grateful for your mindful poem. You're a gem and a true artist. Have a great day, Sara
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Date: 3/5/2024 11:47:00 AM
Beautifully penned Valsa! Loved the last two lines! -Smita
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Date: 3/5/2024 11:19:00 AM
Nice poem. Love the entire sonata, specially the closing verses.
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Date: 3/5/2024 6:15:00 AM
Dear friend Valsa, Your composition seamlessly weaves together the beauty of nature and the complexities of human emotion, creating a symphony of poetic verses that capture the essence of spring and the depth of the human spirit. Your evocative imagery and eloquent expression resonate with me on a personal level, inviting me to immerse myself in the emotional richness of your words. It is a truly artistic piece.
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