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A Spring Soliloquy

New grass will wave in a crisp morning breeze White buds will blur our orchard lanes again Clouds will be dancing over the blue horizon And earth will feel the tiny feet of rain Streams will wash their pebbles bright and clean Each shaken fern will yield a twinkling shower Meadowlarks will share a sweet soliloquy And sun-drenched lilacs will be glad with flower The wide lift of fresh air and skies of blue Will glimmer between each leafy bough of green I will walk into the woods, ushered by a redwing's flute I will bask in the sunshine, and listen to the song of spring New born lambs will suckle in the dew A fragrant petal from the apple tree Will rest upon my cheek, and I will feel the touch of spring And know a sense of peace, throughout the whole of me * * * *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2011 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 1:53:00 PM
The tiny feet of rain and streams washing their pebbles....awesome wording-The touch of spring is eloquently felt by this reader. Conrats on a breathtaking write, Carrie. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2011 6:38:00 AM
Simply marvelous! Well deserved win indeed. So beautiful to read x
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:07:00 AM
Another win for this great poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your success, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful imagery.Congrats Carrie on your win....
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy, Carrie
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:03:00 PM
You can't get better than this one for spring poetry! Congratulations, Carrie!
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:53:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Date: 5/11/2011 4:02:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on another spectacular win in Short Poem contest .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 5/11/2011 2:45:00 PM
Wow. You have all my fav's. Nature, color and a great poem to boot. Very well done. Congrats.
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Date: 1/14/2011 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your well deserved win in Francine Robert's contest "Bring On Spring". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2011 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Francine's Contest, Carrie! Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/10/2011 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Charles
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Date: 1/10/2011 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win, in the contest, carrie
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Date: 1/9/2011 1:48:00 PM
carrie, I believe you utilized nearly all the senses in your imagery of spring: "feel the tiny feet of rain; "lilacs will be glad with flower"; "redwing's flute"; "fragrant petal from the apple tree"; lots of sight and action too. I think all I missed was something to taste. Marvelous. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/9/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this entry. It has me yearning even more for spring to come.
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Date: 1/9/2011 10:11:00 AM
Spring's beauty, so wonderfully spoken in verse. A true vision of beauty! RAY
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Date: 1/9/2011 9:24:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your success in the Bring on Spring contest with this lovely version of spring ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/9/2011 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:38:00 AM
Congrats, Carrie. Beautifully written. Enjoyed. nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/9/2011 3:18:00 AM
marvellous....easily the top poem...you should have been first in the contest.....I especially enjoyed "tiny feet of rain" (wish I'd thought of it first ! ) and "feel the touch of spring"....well written and imaginative work....congratulations Carrie....best wishes Syd
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Date: 1/8/2011 10:38:00 PM
You wove the words in beautifully, Carrie. A winner as usual. . Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/8/2011 7:59:00 PM
What a beautiful poem this one is!Congrats on your big win Carrie!
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Date: 1/8/2011 7:08:00 PM
Your always a joy to read.. congrats on your fine showing in this lovely contest. BG
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Date: 1/8/2011 6:56:00 PM
This is so beautifully written and filled with springtime imagery, Carrie. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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