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A Spring Rain

Gentle grey clouds drift The air heavy with promise birds flutter with joy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/7/2016 1:40:00 AM
Excellent!!!!.... Congrats on being featured....
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Date: 12/4/2016 3:59:00 PM
Hi Barbara, I enjoyed your Haiku. The juxtaposition of your first two lines drew me in for the punch of the last line. I enjoyed this. I have started writing some Haikus and Senryus. I'm a neophyte at this but would love your thoughts if you have a chance to looks at my poems. All the best, JP
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/6/2016 10:31:00 AM
thank you for stopping by. I will check out your work when I have a minute..
Date: 7/2/2009 3:38:00 PM
The electricity of spring, as if life is plugged in for life to sprout, great Haiku>>James
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Date: 6/16/2009 10:17:00 AM
i cant look at my soupmail on my comp... my computer aint very good
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Date: 6/14/2009 9:54:00 AM
Nice haiku! I would have left the "The" off the third line. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/13/2009 6:16:00 PM
What an uplifting piece. I really like the second line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 6/13/2009 3:30:00 PM
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Date: 6/13/2009 12:23:00 AM
You capyure the moment so well here BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/12/2009 7:17:00 PM
Beaiutiful Poem Barbara!!!:):)~I have noticed the gentle softness within "Your" wonderful poetry lately dear lady....Smile, which seems to be such a lovely reflection of "Your Precious Heart & Soul!!!":):)~And this is such a very nice portrait to behold~"Enchanting Write"~"My Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves, Always, John!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Evening Dear Lady!!!":):) Bye ~
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Date: 6/12/2009 7:01:00 PM
yes! the birds love the light-rain! red-winged blackbirds can extend their range for the day (delighting more of us with their soulful lament!) and songbirds are less prone to becoming prey! great haiku! Barbara! and thanks once more for comments!! Jim
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