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Awed by the hypnotic sound and melody of your gold-toned harmony requested a single flower as a memento of your lyrical mysticism yet, you brought on a tide of bliss melodious birdsong, peaceful psalms in an exquisite tangerine blush shade speckled beauty adorns the stems dazzlingly, in a blaze of golden splendor blossom delightfully lulled by the soothing tunes of hazel tales shades play gracefully in motion chase dreams of a faraway rainbow gold bright throbs pulsating heart of a king emitting flaming thrums of ariose spring moods.
Written: May 1st, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1213 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 5/12/2023 7:25:00 AM
Congratulation on winning poem pulsating splendor and peaceful bliss of spring
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Date: 5/4/2023 2:43:00 AM
- I'm so glad I'm not sponsoring any contest... can't understand that this beautiful poem got the "last" place on the winners list... it should be at the top in my opinion... congratulations... we all have different opinions :) - hugs
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Date: 5/2/2023 5:35:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm to your poem my friend. Much enjoyed the inspiration you convey, Lasaad. A winning poem you wrote.
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Date: 5/1/2023 8:48:00 PM
I feel I am transported to a world of song and beauty ! I too am floating in 'a tide of bliss'. This is exquisite poetry. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 5/1/2023 8:49:00 PM
In your title there is a typo. Please correct it.

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