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A Spirit Drained

Battling changes in life. I slip into a distorted & confused frame of mind.
Frustrated & despondent I absorb my shame, 
I then, pick my self up as, my spirit fights to give me strength .
Fighting off fools, bad women & old age.
I seek redemption for my soul, with no games being played, still
Maintaining who I am, I won't give in to them.
I have no expectations from any one, only relief in life for the
things I have done.
As my spirit soars above me against the wind 
I push away & try to ignore the pain felt with in.
Walking along these streets,  I struggle trying to believe that
there's any honesty left, in this society.
This is what I believe to be the closing stages of dying breed.
With my spirit soaring above me, I refrain from taking action, 
I look the other way as if, to say good bye to you again, 
good night from a Spirit Drained.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Strand Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 12:18 AM
Liked this phrase/image David 'my spirit soars above against the wind 'Nice work Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Congrats on your success in Mark's contest
Ashton Avatar
August 17, 2008 at 9:41 PM
as we push on, it seems as though parts of us are drained from our souls. very beautiful write. keep writing - andrea
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August 17, 2008 at 6:45 PM
Powerful reflection with honest emotion. Yes, there is honesty left which it up to us to embrace. To the "Spirit Drained" there is always hope in tomorrow. This is a thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it and for your congrats. Keep on writing. Karen
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August 17, 2008 at 6:25 PM
Quite intense reading for someone who thinks the same. Nicely written from the heart. T
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