A Spent Red Ball

A spent red ball I'm going to sink soon
The artist still engaged in the painting
The ashen sky of this cold afternoon
With my seven hues in a bowl mingling


You have let me fondle your face all day
I'll now push bold strokes as a parting gift
Let your eyes roam my splashy evening play
My crush for you in the pigments adrift


Are not these impressionist reflections
Of long shadows before my pink exit
Tinting your thoughts with my tilting session
Keep well my friends with my kisses sunlit


While you smile, let me go back to the sea
When you're free, do write a sonnet for me
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18 April, 2020
Slipping Soul Sunsets into the Sea Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Probir, well painted. Congratulations on you win. Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 4:47 PM
I loved this Probir. "Let your eyes roam my splashy evening play My crush for you in the pigments adrift" Impressive work! Congratulations on your podium win my friend. Blessings xxoo
Watt Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 6:25 PM
Loved the sun's soliloquy to its admiring painter in your sunset poem Probir. So imaginative and artistically satisfying. Congrats on your win ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 3:48 PM
this is very creative work, Probir. Lovely personification.
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