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A Spent Red Ball

A spent red ball I'm going to sink soon The artist still engaged in the painting The ashen sky of this cold afternoon With my seven hues in a bowl mingling You have let me fondle your face all day I'll now push bold strokes as a parting gift Let your eyes roam my splashy evening play My crush for you in the pigments adrift Are not these impressionist reflections Of long shadows before my pink exit Tinting your thoughts with my tilting session Keep well my friends with my kisses sunlit While you smile, let me go back to the sea When you're free, do write a sonnet for me ______________________________________________ 18 April, 2020 Slipping Soul Sunsets into the Sea Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 4/28/2020 9:00:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Probir, well painted. Congratulations on you win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/27/2020 4:47:00 PM
I loved this Probir. "Let your eyes roam my splashy evening play My crush for you in the pigments adrift" Impressive work! Congratulations on your podium win my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/26/2020 6:25:00 PM
Loved the sun's soliloquy to its admiring painter in your sunset poem Probir. So imaginative and artistically satisfying. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 4/20/2020 3:48:00 PM
this is very creative work, Probir. Lovely personification.
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