A Spectacular Show

Sky covers her nakedness with the raiment of clouds Stars array in circular patterns to stage a group ballet Amid, sits queen moon in silken robes and a silver diadem bathed in garish light with a flash of amber and a blaze of gold like a halogen lamp Soon clouds will make way for the royal maidens’ ramp walk across the long isle of the firmament Keep your eyes raised for the spectacular show Shove your way to the dais to get a better peek! October- 16.2022 ~ Placed Fifth~ For Brian Strand's Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
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Anaya Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 6:10 PM
It has your signature all over it! I recognize you in your poems now. What a spectacular show this one, congratulations, Valsa!
Baker Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 3:59 PM
The light and beauty of the heavens are a delight, as is your lovely poetry, Valsa. Blessings my friend, Bill
Alex Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 8:07 PM
Great celestial scenes. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 1:05 PM
Absolutely marvelous dear Valsa. Your imagery is like a moonlit night for me. I always look forward to your marvelous creativity with words and images. Congratulations dear friend for your win! This is a fav for me.
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Very descriptive winning work about something seen in our vast heaven. Congratulations on being on the winners' list in Brian's contest. Sara
Tor Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 6:32 PM
The way you wrote this Valsa it is a spectacular show...
Brul Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 3:55 PM
This is so spectacular dear friend! A magical show that will last forever in the heart. Congratulations! A fave.
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October 16, 2022 at 12:14 PM
A spectacle to behold Valsa, creativity to pine for, professional quality poetry, and Fave for me today, cheers David
Leffanta Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Amazing how mankind loves space and ignores the water they need to survive. Enjoyed your review, Valsa! Aloha!
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 8:32 AM
a glorious personification depiction. Yes, that's for sure!!
Poet Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 6:54 AM
I really enjoyed seeing the spectacle put on by the stars! Valsa. A layer of beauty descended from the skies above thanks to the fantastic images and the one-of-a-kind language. Best wishes for the contact
Pandit Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Great imagery from heavens above. Enjoyed the celestial show! Best to you, Valsa.
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