A Souper Friend

I crawl into a cave called myself.
It’s dry and dusty, cobwebbed.
So afraid to be, alone in the dark,
“Who am I,” is my cry.

Then Trixie’s best friend comes along,*
like a cowgirl set out on a romantic adventure.
This changeling becomes a pirate or
a faerie tale...mingling with the deer and frogs.
but not too sweet, ‘cause she’s a spark plug.

She squeezes out a saturated rag of tears and snot,
for this cowgirl spots the forgotten one -
a little child who needs a hug,

and she has a way of embracing the child in me.
...and her poetry like taffy pulls,
twists in a delicious way, half-cocked.

I’ve learned from her to grab the stars and fly
as if Tinkerbell dusted me with rare pastels.

In my mind we’re dressed in
kicka$$ gowns and fascinators
merrily sipping sherry in
the garden of Make-Believe.

And by the way, I love my souper friends. Don’t feel left out.
So many touch me in so many ways. God bless you all.

And one last shout out to Caren Krutsinger!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Theraven Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Kim, I know Trixie's friend too. She is a special friend indeed. But one question, what are fascinators? -Richard
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 6:03 PM
During the royal wedding you would see hair decorations in womens’ hair. Fascinating, eh?! ;)
Awtry Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 4:03 PM
This poem is tailor-made for our Caren! I love this part especially! In my mind we’re dressed in kicka$$ gowns and fascinators merrily sipping sherry in the garden of Make-Believe.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, P.S.!
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations, Kim, on your win in the contest with this wonderful tribute poem! Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 5:05 PM
caren is a one of a kind, and I am proud to be an Iowan with her!! Congrats for the win, and for showing us this gem of a poem about TRIXIE!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:46 PM
Here’s to the Iowan’s! Thank you, sweet lady!
Romios Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Yahoo on a win, Kim Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:28 PM
I adore Caren, Kim. She hides nothing and her open heart she lays bare. Her sense of humor cheers and causes laughter, a much needed commodity in this serious world. I am so happy to read this tribute for her that is so deserving of your wonderful First Placement! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:46 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
La France Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful tribute poem!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Scars Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:39 PM
love that sweet lady! congrats lovely Kim! :)-luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much, dear Lu Loo!
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:33 AM
An excellent choice Kim! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Watson Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Yes she certainly has a unique flair for taking us to unusual places in fun fashion! Congratulations on your high placement,Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:37 PM
Woot! Woot! Thanks, Wendy!
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:48 AM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
May Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:20 AM
Congratulations on your placement
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, Bobby! :)
Warrior Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Excellent verse, excellent choice Kimmy...Caren is a beautiful soul...she has a childlike charm and innocence...we are lucky to have her here, along with you...^WW^ :o)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:34 AM
I have to comment. Thank you Winged Warrior. I love this poem! I have actually tried to FAV it three times. It will only accept it as a FAV one time. GRRRRRRRR
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 10:53 PM
You've really done Caren justice, Kim. This is a wonderful portrait and tribute to the multi-faceted, feisty yet tender Caren we've come to know through her plethora of poems. Thanks for a great read about a great gal (from another great gal)! Best wishes, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations to both of you, Kim and Caren. I am so happy that this wonderful tribute did so well in the contest! Yippee!! Warm wishes, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:34 AM
Thank you my friend, Gershon! I am loving re-reading this poem about six hundred times a day.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! :)
Perrin Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 8:50 AM
What a beautiful poem :-) x
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:42 AM
Elaine, this poem has me happily grinning and spinning and I have to say probably my FAV poem in the world.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Thank you, Elaine!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 3:54 PM
I quadruple love this! I am so happy that you thought of us! Trixie is impossible now. It will be horrible trying to get her head out of the doorways, so we can go to supper.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 3:59 PM
For sure! <3 Kim
Krutsinger Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Oh, my goodness Kim! I started reading, all roped in and happy and then I saw the name TRIXIE and I really paid some attention. She was cheering and whooping and smacking me with her chameleon umbrellas. A FAVORITE for me! But SHHHH. Trixie thinks it is all about her! We are both honored!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 3:59 PM
LOL...our little secret!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 9:48 AM
This is so adorable... God bless you and her. She truly is a kind hearted soul who shows so much appreciation for other writers.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:36 AM
Thank you Regina. I cannot get away from this page, as you can probably guess why......
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 9:59 AM
She is faithful to reading and writing poetry! Thank you, Regina! I am enjoying your poetry too! <3 Kim
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 8:53 AM
- Lovely written for Caren, Kim :) - A skilled poet, who has a lot on her heart and a wonderful fantasy :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:37 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I am so glad to see my most faithful followers commenting here. I could probably leave this page, but WHY would I?
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Thank you so much - to the sweet poet who always posts a sunshiny smile! <3 Kim
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