A Souper Friend

I crawl into a cave called myself.
It’s dry and dusty, cobwebbed.
So afraid to be, alone in the dark,
“Who am I,” is my cry.

Then Trixie’s best friend comes along,*
like a cowgirl set out on a romantic adventure.
This changeling becomes a pirate or
a faerie tale...mingling with the deer and frogs.
but not too sweet, ‘cause she’s a spark plug.

She squeezes out a saturated rag of tears and snot,
for this cowgirl spots the forgotten one -
a little child who needs a hug,

and she has a way of embracing the child in me.
...and her poetry like taffy pulls,
twists in a delicious way, half-cocked.

I’ve learned from her to grab the stars and fly
as if Tinkerbell dusted me with rare pastels.

In my mind we’re dressed in
kicka$$ gowns and fascinators
merrily sipping sherry in
the garden of Make-Believe.

And by the way, I love my souper friends. Don’t feel left out.
So many touch me in so many ways. God bless you all.

And one last shout out to Caren Krutsinger!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/5/2019 10:47:00 PM
Kim, I know Trixie's friend too. She is a special friend indeed. But one question, what are fascinators? -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2019 6:03:00 PM
During the royal wedding you would see hair decorations in womens’ hair. Fascinating, eh?! ;)
Date: 9/28/2019 4:03:00 PM
This poem is tailor-made for our Caren! I love this part especially! In my mind we’re dressed in kicka$$ gowns and fascinators merrily sipping sherry in the garden of Make-Believe.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, P.S.!
Date: 9/27/2019 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim, on your win in the contest with this wonderful tribute poem! Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/27/2019 5:05:00 PM
caren is a one of a kind, and I am proud to be an Iowan with her!! Congrats for the win, and for showing us this gem of a poem about TRIXIE!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:46:00 PM
Here’s to the Iowan’s! Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 9/27/2019 4:28:00 PM
I adore Caren, Kim. She hides nothing and her open heart she lays bare. Her sense of humor cheers and causes laughter, a much needed commodity in this serious world. I am so happy to read this tribute for her that is so deserving of your wonderful First Placement! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 9/27/2019 4:28:00 PM
Yahoo on a win, Kim Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Date: 9/27/2019 2:40:00 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful tribute poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Date: 9/27/2019 1:39:00 PM
love that sweet lady! congrats lovely Kim! :)-luloo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Lu Loo!
Date: 9/27/2019 9:33:00 AM
An excellent choice Kim! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 9/27/2019 8:24:00 AM
Yes she certainly has a unique flair for taking us to unusual places in fun fashion! Congratulations on your high placement,Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:37:00 PM
Woot! Woot! Thanks, Wendy!
Date: 9/27/2019 7:48:00 AM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/27/2019 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Bobby! :)
Date: 9/23/2019 2:13:00 PM
Excellent verse, excellent choice Kimmy...Caren is a beautiful soul...she has a childlike charm and innocence...we are lucky to have her here, along with you...^WW^ :o)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2019 1:34:00 AM
I have to comment. Thank you Winged Warrior. I love this poem! I have actually tried to FAV it three times. It will only accept it as a FAV one time. GRRRRRRRR
Date: 9/21/2019 10:53:00 PM
You've really done Caren justice, Kim. This is a wonderful portrait and tribute to the multi-faceted, feisty yet tender Caren we've come to know through her plethora of poems. Thanks for a great read about a great gal (from another great gal)! Best wishes, Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/27/2019 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you, Kim and Caren. I am so happy that this wonderful tribute did so well in the contest! Yippee!! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2019 1:34:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Gershon! I am loving re-reading this poem about six hundred times a day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2019 6:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! :)
Date: 9/21/2019 8:50:00 AM
What a beautiful poem :-) x
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2019 1:42:00 AM
Elaine, this poem has me happily grinning and spinning and I have to say probably my FAV poem in the world.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2019 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine!
Date: 9/20/2019 3:54:00 PM
I quadruple love this! I am so happy that you thought of us! Trixie is impossible now. It will be horrible trying to get her head out of the doorways, so we can go to supper.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 3:59:00 PM
For sure! <3 Kim
Date: 9/20/2019 3:49:00 PM
Oh, my goodness Kim! I started reading, all roped in and happy and then I saw the name TRIXIE and I really paid some attention. She was cheering and whooping and smacking me with her chameleon umbrellas. A FAVORITE for me! But SHHHH. Trixie thinks it is all about her! We are both honored!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 3:59:00 PM
LOL...our little secret!
Date: 9/20/2019 9:48:00 AM
This is so adorable... God bless you and her. She truly is a kind hearted soul who shows so much appreciation for other writers.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2019 1:36:00 AM
Thank you Regina. I cannot get away from this page, as you can probably guess why......
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 9:59:00 AM
She is faithful to reading and writing poetry! Thank you, Regina! I am enjoying your poetry too! <3 Kim
Date: 9/20/2019 8:53:00 AM
- Lovely written for Caren, Kim :) - A skilled poet, who has a lot on her heart and a wonderful fantasy :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I am so glad to see my most faithful followers commenting here. I could probably leave this page, but WHY would I?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much - to the sweet poet who always posts a sunshiny smile! <3 Kim
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