A Sonnet On a Discord

The ringing was so piercing and incessant
from way outside the house I heard its blare.
I ran into my room; my clock flourescent,
that object of offense, sat clanging there.

But when its button “off” I firmly pressed,
I hadn’t done a thing to stop the sound.
I then perceived there must have been some jest.
Oh, where could all the clamor’s source be found?

I sought my plague with mounting discontent,
and every room I managed soon to rake.
It taunted me; such shrillness was a torment.
And suddenly, I found myself awake!

Subconsciously my rising I had fought
and put the ringing in my own dream’s plot.

(This is a true story of how I kept myself from waking to my
dang ding-a-ling alarm clock)
For Paula Swanson's Ding-a-Ling Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/12/2020 1:21:00 PM
This one was on my top 10 list from your Cheshire Chuckles chapbook. So enjoyed reading it again, very creative writing! You deserved better than an HM, just sayin'.
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:56:00 PM
Chris is spot on with his comment Andrea. That is why I enjoy reading your sonnets so much. Congrats on your HM with this poem. It was EXCELLENT! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea with you success with your sonnet. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Ding-A-Ling". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:44:00 PM
Very original I have no idea why it didn't get higher, just taste I am sure..we all know..we have different things which "reach" us..perfect form, original content! Enjoy your win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:40:00 AM
congrats on your well deserved win!!
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:32:00 AM
cute one , congrats on your HM
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:17:00 AM
GOOD ONE! Andrea. Congratulaions on your BIG WIN, Lainie
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:58:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in Paula's contest with this exceptional piece.. enjoy another special honor my friend and happy weekend.. the man is here so time on Soup limited..luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:40:00 PM
Amazing-- how do you do that?? Me I just hit the snooze button--eeep I have so much catching up to do here contests, judging & commenting eeepp-- btw thanks for all your comments sweetie pie :) also hmmm I believe discordinance is spelled with an "i" eeep correct me if I'm wrong please, sorry if I'm wrong...hugs nikko :)
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Date: 7/31/2010 8:58:00 PM
it must feel so weird when you actually wake up from that dream, right? ..thinking to yourself you're crazy. it was your alarm all along.so bizarre. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:09:00 PM
I have totally done this-I hate alarm clocks! Yes I live in the U.S.-I Live in Tularosa, New Mexico. Living in the desert you never know what you'll see-Flash floods are very common during monsoon season-They hit without warning and leave destruction in their paths!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/31/2010 10:04:00 AM
During my working days I would have loved to have your dream formula for non-waking. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/31/2010 6:28:00 AM
Wonderful entry for Paula's contest Andrea.. good luck.. u ARE the QUEEN of the Sonnet.. and this one proves how creative u are and how expressive too.. good luck this one is already a big winner my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:21:00 AM
A nice approach to the theme of the contest and self exeperienced, Andrea.
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Date: 7/31/2010 4:45:00 AM
But when I, its off button firmly pressed/and had not done a thing to stop the sound/Why I preceived this must have been a jest/where was the source of clamour to be found?....just a bit of jiggling with the meter? as to sestina..I know they're long. I needed a form which could tell a story & not be a narrative. If poets don't wish to read it because it's long...oh well? PS GOOD contest entry!
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:32:00 PM
Shame poor you.. I have this thing against my alarm clock, it tends to go off at the most inappropriate times :( when I'm having the most amazing dreams lol - gl for the contest Hope you'll have an awesome weekend luv Wilma Btw, I'm sending you sm in a bit, puzzled about something hehe
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