A Sonnet On a Discord

The ringing was so piercing and incessant
from way outside the house I heard its blare.
I ran into my room; my clock flourescent,
that object of offense, sat clanging there.

But when its button “off” I firmly pressed,
I hadn’t done a thing to stop the sound.
I then perceived there must have been some jest.
Oh, where could all the clamor’s source be found?

I sought my plague with mounting discontent,
and every room I managed soon to rake.
It taunted me; such shrillness was a torment.
And suddenly, I found myself awake!

Subconsciously my rising I had fought
and put the ringing in my own dream’s plot.

(This is a true story of how I kept myself from waking to my
dang ding-a-ling alarm clock)
For Paula Swanson's Ding-a-Ling Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 1:21 PM
This one was on my top 10 list from your Cheshire Chuckles chapbook. So enjoyed reading it again, very creative writing! You deserved better than an HM, just sayin'.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Chris is spot on with his comment Andrea. That is why I enjoy reading your sonnets so much. Congrats on your HM with this poem. It was EXCELLENT! Aloha, Connie
Freeman Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Congratulations Andrea with you success with your sonnet. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Ding-A-Ling". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Very original I have no idea why it didn't get higher, just taste I am sure..we all know..we have different things which "reach" us..perfect form, original content! Enjoy your win! Light & Love
Culverhouse Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 7:40 AM
congrats on your well deserved win!!
Roberts Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:32 AM
cute one , congrats on your HM
George   Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 2:17 AM
GOOD ONE! Andrea. Congratulaions on your BIG WIN, Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in Paula's contest with this exceptional piece.. enjoy another special honor my friend and happy weekend.. the man is here so time on Soup limited..luv..
K. Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Amazing-- how do you do that?? Me I just hit the snooze button--eeep I have so much catching up to do here contests, judging & commenting eeepp-- btw thanks for all your comments sweetie pie :) also hmmm I believe discordinance is spelled with an "i" eeep correct me if I'm wrong please, sorry if I'm wrong...hugs nikko :)
Chachere Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 8:58 PM
it must feel so weird when you actually wake up from that dream, right? ..thinking to yourself you're crazy. it was your alarm all along.so bizarre. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Conway Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 7:09 PM
I have totally done this-I hate alarm clocks! Yes I live in the U.S.-I Live in Tularosa, New Mexico. Living in the desert you never know what you'll see-Flash floods are very common during monsoon season-They hit without warning and leave destruction in their paths!~Tirzah~
Austin Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 10:04 AM
During my working days I would have loved to have your dream formula for non-waking. Love, Dave
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Wonderful entry for Paula's contest Andrea.. good luck.. u ARE the QUEEN of the Sonnet.. and this one proves how creative u are and how expressive too.. good luck this one is already a big winner my friend.. with luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 5:21 AM
A nice approach to the theme of the contest and self exeperienced, Andrea.
Guzzi Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 4:45 AM
But when I, its off button firmly pressed/and had not done a thing to stop the sound/Why I preceived this must have been a jest/where was the source of clamour to be found?....just a bit of jiggling with the meter? as to sestina..I know they're long. I needed a form which could tell a story & not be a narrative. If poets don't wish to read it because it's long...oh well? PS GOOD contest entry!
Neels Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:32 PM
Shame poor you.. I have this thing against my alarm clock, it tends to go off at the most inappropriate times :( when I'm having the most amazing dreams lol - gl for the contest Hope you'll have an awesome weekend luv Wilma Btw, I'm sending you sm in a bit, puzzled about something hehe
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