A Soldier, Valiant and Brave

As I watch his wooden casket lowered into the ground,
I can still hear enemy weapons firing round after round.
Forever now, he'll lie in darkness; a terrible fate I lament.
Weeping with malaise of guilt, in prayer my head is bent,
trying to muffle my sobs so they escape without a sound.

My warm tears are mingling with December's chilling rain.
Memories cause my depression. Now I live with the pain
of knowing it was me he saved. This should be my grave,
for he died protecting me. He was a hero, valiantly brave.
I whisper words of sorrow to him, in hymns of sad refrain.

On a granite stone, his date of birth and death appear.
My fingers trace them, as again my mind can clearly hear
explosions of mortar shells and the morbid smell of blood
before something heavy fell on me, landing with a thud.
That deathly moment in life, will remain with me, I fear.

My hands tremble as clouds above darken to nimbus gray.
I fall to my knees in anguish, searching for words to convey
the depth of gratitude that I owe him, but none can I find.
I'll live with his death haunting me, to that I am resigned,
as I recall this rainy day and the scent of flowers in array.

Death is the outcome for many when men march to wars.
I had no illusion that my service would leave me with scars,
but nothing would've prepared my heart to feel so inept
at thanking him who gave his life. What can I say except,
"I leave this grave distraught; it should be mine, not yours."



July 7, 2022
Tears of a Valiant Soldier Contest
Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal
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Horsman Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 6:12 PM
There are many ways to describe war and its tragedies, this poem, has got to be one of the finest i've ever read. To my fav, Jenna.
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Harry, your kind comments are so very encouraging. What a sad world in which we live and die in wars... foreign and domestic. Thank you for the fav.
Kitchin Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 2:36 PM
Jenna, a powerful and emotive poem, well done, best of luck in the contest!
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 6:31 PM
Thanks for your thoughts and wish of luck, Tania.
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July 7, 2022 at 12:29 PM
When soldiers are on the front line, they only have each other’s valour and quick thinking to depend on, your soldier is suffering survivor’s guilt, in this heartfelt tribute poem to all our fallen soldiers, truly somber writing Jenna, best for contest, cheers David
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 6:30 PM
David, by the time I wrote the last line, I had tears in my eyes. I cannot imagine having to go to war. The very thought of killing people is so repulsive to me. We humans are so unfit to solve our differences in a civilized manner. Thank you, for your support with these lines.
Hankins Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 9:10 AM
A beautiful tribute to the valliant, fallen soldier. Hard to read without tearing up, Jenna. Exquisite rhythm and rhyming. I think you should do very well in the contest.
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Its effect on your emotions is treasured by me, Milt. Thank you for your reaction. It's what a poet strives for in an emotional write.
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