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A Solar System Is Watching

I study eyes, eye's only mind sees. Inside those orbs a little protogenic me crawls away. The tiny creature is going back to God, he remains cohesive in a residual way. A solar system is watching; its dying sun is a question mark. Jupiter and Planet X are returning to cosmic whale sperm. Earth has got too big; that old brass and leather engine that once made frames for mirrors is now smoke. Not at the beginning or the end, I am doing 'mind' somewhere else. I am limping along toward a Gas Giant some have perhaps misnamed.

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Date: 8/12/2019 12:05:00 PM
If you sail past it would that qualify as passing gas?
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Eric Ashford
Date: 8/13/2019 5:15:00 PM
Absolutely, but never get too near. The human nostrils are just not equipped. LOL
Date: 7/10/2019 8:37:00 AM
Jumpin' Jupiter! You've got me raking through what little hair I have left with this one Eric! Out of this world! Well done.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/10/2019 9:43:00 AM
Much obliged Dean! Speaking as another hairless poet, I have fewer follicles to interrupt the blood flow to my brain now. The results are questionable, but the blather is more quirky for sure. Cheers!
Date: 7/10/2019 7:47:00 AM
Your writing style is wild Eric, I love the way you stretch my brain. Thank you! xomo
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/10/2019 8:11:00 AM
Cheers Maureen, odd one this, but I think it blunders through to some small truth. Many thanks!

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