A Solar System Is Watching

I study eyes, eye's only mind sees.
Inside those orbs a little
protogenic me crawls away.
The tiny creature is going back to God,
he remains cohesive in a residual way.

A solar system is watching;
its dying sun is a question mark.
Jupiter and Planet X
are returning to cosmic whale sperm.
Earth has got too big;
that old brass and leather engine
that once made frames for mirrors
is now smoke.

Not at the beginning or the end,
I am doing 'mind' somewhere else.
I am limping along toward a Gas Giant
some have perhaps misnamed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 12:05 PM
If you sail past it would that qualify as passing gas?
Ashford Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Absolutely, but never get too near. The human nostrils are just not equipped. LOL
Wood Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Jumpin' Jupiter! You've got me raking through what little hair I have left with this one Eric! Out of this world! Well done.
Ashford Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Much obliged Dean! Speaking as another hairless poet, I have fewer follicles to interrupt the blood flow to my brain now. The results are questionable, but the blather is more quirky for sure. Cheers!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Your writing style is wild Eric, I love the way you stretch my brain. Thank you! xomo
Ashford Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Cheers Maureen, odd one this, but I think it blunders through to some small truth. Many thanks!
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