A Sojourn With Deathly Swans

there is no fire in the lavender skies of February
it is as if all that exists with warmth, light and desire
has fled to the future
it is here that the white swans muse and ponder
slowly stirring in hapless meanderings
through a stoic sluggish pond
it is here that I find myself coming to belong

nestled in the cold casket of a wind still winter
spring has shown its face with flowers
soiled, stagnant and sour
nature cultivates somber green to justify the incessant gray
the mossy sludge of rains fallen in my desolate pall
where there are no colors in my empty heart
for I have imprisoned hope and lost the key
somewhere in the dire fog

this catatonia speaks tones of wretched gloom
that paralyzes with foreboding dullness
its ghastly numbness buries the ghosts that haunt
for gray gives my soul a vapid and sullen vacuity
I tread bent and worn in this wasteland
seeking a sojourn with deathly swans
I am empirically lost in the shroud of shielded gray skies
hiding myself in the mists of passionless pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Poetic beauty in bleakness, Lonna - "cold casket of wind stilled winter." Your images truly convey the pensive sense of of a soul clothed in greyness longing for winter to be over. So well done with imaginative depth! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of blue skies and warm days to you!
Blodgett Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 8:47 AM
Your comments are always a beautiful blessing! Thanks Sam
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 4:33 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... even midsummer day can feel like a day in February ... (we have a cold and wet July) - A beautiful poem, Lonna :) - hugs
Blodgett Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 8:47 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise! Health and happiness. Lonna
Radice Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 12:55 AM
I believe this to be your best work Lonna. Great writing. Cheers - Gary
Blodgett Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Gary I am humbled by your wonderful comment. Many thanks. Health and happiness Lonna
Van De Linder Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 5:07 PM
Love your writing!
Blodgett Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so much Alex! Health and happiness. Lonna
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