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He swam his pure mode onto the freeway, At the crash of midnight, under a dull ray, It's as if it's a rolling trip of a sound move, He chased a vast owl overhead and flew away. The monster sinks into the usual groove, Also, to ask him for the land sternly proves, Consequently, the vehicle started to shake, His anguish freed the load from reprove. A bird in the sky, tickling for air's sake, His eyes boldly rushed toward the lake, It takes a solid step on a sharp path, A twig from a maple tree no leaf shake. Explore the world from a tree's bypath, Connect the fiery red and orange lath, It sinks evenly into the dreadful abyss, Bird quill pens are plagued by raw wrath. The bird looks at the sprinting diss, Instead of roving, the beast is remiss, The auld damp air drove the birds away, Birds look for limbs that rest on bliss.
2ND Place Contest Winner Written: June 30, 2022 Flight Three Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 7/29/2022 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful second place win my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/27/2022 6:37:00 AM
VERY NICE Perfect rhyming So rhythmic. I am whelmed
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Date: 7/26/2022 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving win ...dear friend !
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Date: 7/26/2022 4:01:00 PM
I love this! Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 7/26/2022 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "A Soaring Bird" can be very pretty to watch. Great Write. Have a blessed/wonderful day............................
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Date: 7/3/2022 9:41:00 AM
Very engaging poem, Lasaad. Like us, all creatures of creation face challenges, discomfort and easy and gentle winds as we follow our own paths. Bill
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Date: 7/1/2022 5:01:00 AM
A captivating poem with powerful verses, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Masterfully done, Blessings!
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Date: 6/30/2022 9:07:00 PM
You are a master in Rubaiyat and pantoums..... ! Two very difficult forms of versification ! The image of the birds' flying into sky's free way is so beautiful and captivating ! A great entry for the contest, dear poet friend ! All the Best!
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Date: 6/30/2022 1:26:00 PM
Bird soaring on a freedom flight--is a sight to behold. Well done in this hard to execute form, Lasaad. Best to you.
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