A Snipe and a Marksman

Once there was a marksman 
He was in the woods to hunt
He met a snipe as he was on his way.
Snipe said “don’t hunt my kids if you confront them”
As they have gone in the forest to play”.
The marks said, “ Alright”
He took a few steps and came back
He asked the snipe, “But how shall I know they’re your kids?
Tell me something about what they look like?”
Or any other marks on their bodies?	 
Oh, Marksman, they’re the most beautiful kids!
Nodding not to shoot them, went on his hike
When he returned to the same spot
Where he has met the snipe
He held a string of young snipes
Looking at the string holding her own kids
The snipe started crying looking at her dead kids.
Oh, why didn't you shoot me in my kids’ stead?
I’ve shot the ugly I could find instead.
The snipe said “Woe to me, don't you know” fool”?
Moms think their children the most beautiful”.

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June 21, 2014   (Originally posted on 11/23/11)
Form : Free Verse 
Dr. Ram Mehta
Second Place Win
Contest: Story poem by Carol Eastman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Love the message in this poem Dr. Ram, nice one, James :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Hi Dr. Ram, I enjoyed this fascinating well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
Onclaud Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 1:57 PM
lovely poetic essay on children and peace, dr. ram.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Rain Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 8:34 AM
sad , yet impacting and as well ,a oxy moron . Well done Doctor !
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 8:30 PM
Thanks, Shanity ,for visiting this old poem
Anderson-Throop Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 1:31 AM
brutal and honest (tho i beg to differ with the premise that GOD takes away pleasure and passion....)
Nyumu Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 7:28 AM
mmmh...hatred n desire. as paradoxical as life!
A   Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 10:01 PM
hi... are you..oka??.,,,
Horne Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 2:45 PM
Insightful piece, Dr Ram. Thanks for all your kind comments - and many congrats on your wins too : )
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