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A Smart Car's Brilliant Campaign

A quantum bit of tongue in cheek
The physics of an ad to pique 

A trusted name to seal the deals
Stephen Hawking hawking wheels




18.02.05

Kim Rodrigues'
Poetry In Motion Contest
1st Place

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Charlie Smith

March 8, 2018 at 3:16 PM

Great "tongue in cheek", congratulations Maureen...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 16, 2018 at 10:12 AM

Thank you Charlie :)

Sandra Haight

March 7, 2018 at 1:13 PM

Very clever, Maureen! Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 8, 2018 at 1:10 PM

Thank you Sandra :) love 'n hugs to you! xomo

Eve Roper

March 6, 2018 at 11:38 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 7, 2018 at 7:47 AM

Thank you Eve! :) xomo

Line Gauthier

March 6, 2018 at 5:56 PM

Cool one, Maureen. Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 7, 2018 at 7:46 AM

Thank you Line! :) xomo

Jan Allison

March 6, 2018 at 3:58 PM

What a smart poem mo:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 6, 2018 at 5:53 PM

Giggles thank you! ;) xomo <3

Roy Pett

March 6, 2018 at 2:47 PM

Back with my congratulations on your well deserved win Maureen. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 6, 2018 at 3:38 PM

Thank you Roy! Mo hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

March 6, 2018 at 12:24 PM

This is absolutely ingenious! Kudos to you and congratulations on your well-earned trophy, Maureen. :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 6, 2018 at 2:35 PM

Huzzah! Thank you! :) 'twas a treat to compete! xomo

Kim Rodrigues

March 6, 2018 at 9:37 AM

I love the alliteration and the smartness of your poem! Thoroughly enjoyed! Congratulations, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 6, 2018 at 10:21 AM

I'm delighted you did! Thank you so much Kim! Your contest was a delight to write for, my muse thanks you again :) xomo!

Joseph P. DiMino

February 10, 2018 at 1:16 PM

Love it:)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 10, 2018 at 2:15 PM

Thank you Joe :) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden

February 8, 2018 at 6:57 PM

Awesome ... Hawking is a hero of mine, and I actually got to meet him and talk to him. I also got to work with Paul Zemecnik when I was at Clark U, (as part of an externship), who helped discover Transfer RNA - an amazing man. I keep applying to work at the LHC in Geneva, but I think they giggle at my age now, lol. This is wonderful fav-ing! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 9, 2018 at 9:28 AM

A hero of mine too :) keep applying! Ya neva know. Thanks Sweetness! xomo

Robert Warlov

February 8, 2018 at 1:24 PM

I'm sold! --- Fill my garage's black-hole!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 9, 2018 at 9:26 AM

LOL Awesome ;) xomo!

Anna Hopper

February 7, 2018 at 4:39 PM

Nice! Love it!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 8, 2018 at 8:17 AM

Thank you Anna :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

February 6, 2018 at 7:05 AM

Well written, a clever depiction!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 6, 2018 at 9:20 AM

Thank you Vijay! :) xomo!

Roy Pett

February 6, 2018 at 7:01 AM

Brilliant Maureen, G L in contest, this must figure in the equation. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 6, 2018 at 9:19 AM

Thank you, yes, lol for the sake of the contest I squeaked out three extra lines ;)

Silent One

February 6, 2018 at 5:40 AM

Very clever lol..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 6, 2018 at 9:17 AM

Thank you :) I was happy with "Brilliant Ad: Stephen Hawking~ hawking wheels" which cracked me up but wasn't sure how it would be received, so I tried a little harder...