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A Smart Car's Brilliant Campaign

A quantum bit of tongue in cheek
The physics of an ad to pique 

A trusted name to seal the deals
Stephen Hawking hawking wheels




18.02.05

Kim Rodrigues'
Poetry In Motion Contest
1st Place

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Charlie Smith

Date: 3/8/2018 3:16:00 PM

Great "tongue in cheek", congratulations Maureen...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/16/2018 10:12:00 AM

Thank you Charlie :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/7/2018 1:13:00 PM

Very clever, Maureen! Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/8/2018 1:10:00 PM

Thank you Sandra :) love 'n hugs to you! xomo

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2018 11:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/7/2018 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Eve! :) xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2018 5:56:00 PM

Cool one, Maureen. Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/7/2018 7:46:00 AM

Thank you Line! :) xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2018 3:58:00 PM

What a smart poem mo:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/6/2018 5:53:00 PM

Giggles thank you! ;) xomo <3

Roy Pett

Date: 3/6/2018 2:47:00 PM

Back with my congratulations on your well deserved win Maureen. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/6/2018 3:38:00 PM

Thank you Roy! Mo hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2018 12:24:00 PM

This is absolutely ingenious! Kudos to you and congratulations on your well-earned trophy, Maureen. :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/6/2018 2:35:00 PM

Huzzah! Thank you! :) 'twas a treat to compete! xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/6/2018 9:37:00 AM

I love the alliteration and the smartness of your poem! Thoroughly enjoyed! Congratulations, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/6/2018 10:21:00 AM

I'm delighted you did! Thank you so much Kim! Your contest was a delight to write for, my muse thanks you again :) xomo!

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/10/2018 1:16:00 PM

Love it:)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/10/2018 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Joe :) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/8/2018 6:57:00 PM

Awesome ... Hawking is a hero of mine, and I actually got to meet him and talk to him. I also got to work with Paul Zemecnik when I was at Clark U, (as part of an externship), who helped discover Transfer RNA - an amazing man. I keep applying to work at the LHC in Geneva, but I think they giggle at my age now, lol. This is wonderful fav-ing! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/9/2018 9:28:00 AM

A hero of mine too :) keep applying! Ya neva know. Thanks Sweetness! xomo

Robert Warlov

Date: 2/8/2018 1:24:00 PM

I'm sold! --- Fill my garage's black-hole!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/9/2018 9:26:00 AM

LOL Awesome ;) xomo!

Anna Hopper

Date: 2/7/2018 4:39:00 PM

Nice! Love it!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/8/2018 8:17:00 AM

Thank you Anna :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/6/2018 7:05:00 AM

Well written, a clever depiction!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/6/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! :) xomo!

Roy Pett

Date: 2/6/2018 7:01:00 AM

Brilliant Maureen, G L in contest, this must figure in the equation. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/6/2018 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, yes, lol for the sake of the contest I squeaked out three extra lines ;)

Silent One

Date: 2/6/2018 5:40:00 AM

Very clever lol..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/6/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thank you :) I was happy with "Brilliant Ad: Stephen Hawking~ hawking wheels" which cracked me up but wasn't sure how it would be received, so I tried a little harder...

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/5/2018 10:49:00 PM

Very witty, Maureen. I like it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/6/2018 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Line :) xomo!

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