A Slow Goodbye

Because the decision
To say goodbye
Is too hard to take
Because my heart will break
With your last embrace
My soul bleed
To see your need
For me…
I say goodbye
Gradually

Slowly…I start to fade
A little less every day
Pulling back
Staying away
A little more every day
Almost imperceptible my retreat
So that you don’t notice
So that you don’t weep
Bracing your heart
For the time
When I will be no more

A gradual silent goodbye
No need to give reasons why
Just to…..fade
F  A    D     E……
While sun rays give in to shade
A time to savor every last moment
Gradually
G    R     A     D     U      A       L        L        Y
To cease to be
A slowly ebbing tide
That pulls away from you
Without you realizing
Till you are standing on only the 
Warm moistness
Of where I bathed you
Then you will know
Then you will see
That I’m gone…

Then it will be too late
To beg me to stay
To plead
And ask for reasons
To cry

A gradual goodbye
For my heart is about to die
I must leave
You will grieve
But you will be strong
You will carry on
For I withdrew
Little by little 
My little songs
My little words
From your heart

Slowly
Gradually
Imperceptible retreat
Till one day

O N E    D A Y

     I’ll   
                 be  
                               G……..
			                 O……….
				                    N………
					                       E……

Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/1/2013 1:00:00 PM
It's so important to give all of yourself and to love wholeheartedly...make the other person never want to withdraw gradually....awesome write Eileen! Hugs
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Date: 9/23/2013 7:55:00 AM
Been here, done that. Stunning. Phew!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:35:00 AM
:) Stunning, eh???? ;) I will accept that graciously!
Date: 9/22/2013 5:41:00 PM
Most relationships move in this direction eventually but My little Desert Orchid will go with a bang lol. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:36:00 AM
Why, Mr Seal...Why must they move in this direction? This will not do. HA HA about the bang...Hmmmmm...perhaps you need to go through the poem a SECOND time...I mentioned a slowly ebbing tide...where is the BANG in that? You are a tease!!!
Date: 9/21/2013 6:30:00 PM
Wow sweetie...riveting..... mesmerizing.... better than someone never realizing you are gone!...really enjoyed this one a lot...:-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, MD...SO so sweet of you. A gradual parting of ways is perhaps better for all concerned....Easing into a new direction and path...Thanks for your comments! :)
Date: 9/21/2013 4:52:00 PM
Happens to everyone - but that does not make it easy. I hope you are having a good day and keep up the moving poetry! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:52:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Matthew...Yes...Poetry is my life. I'm so glad for your visit! :)
Date: 9/21/2013 2:12:00 PM
Ow goosebumps and a favourite..I guess that says it all..Wow
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 9:52:00 AM
YUP YUP YUP! It sure does!!!! HUGS HUGS HUGS!!!
Date: 9/21/2013 1:49:00 PM
One day we will be gone and yet we will be arriving in Glory and have an eternity to ponder all we have experienced here.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:02:00 AM
Yes...it is soon...very very soon! Thank you for the post, Richard...and for the reminder...Hugs
Date: 9/21/2013 11:52:00 AM
riveting piece you penned here, eileen... you give it a resonance that simply moves me..greeeat writing!..:) huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:04:00 AM
Thanks, Nette...you are always so sweet in the choice of words to encourage...I appreciate it! Hugs!
Date: 9/21/2013 10:28:00 AM
I feel instead of "So that you don’t weep" I do weep and instead of "But you will be strong" you will be weak. Excellent poem on grief tied with full emotion. You know well what the heart speaks in such circumstances. You are genius poet for me. Loved always, bl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for your input, my dear. However, I'm trying to say that I will leave gradually so that he WILL be able to move on without quiet noticing that I'm gone....Thanks for sharing your take on it, though...Very kind of you...Genius poet??? WOW! What an honor coming from a fellow poet. Thank you!!!!!!
Date: 9/21/2013 9:09:00 AM
When is time for us to go is not our decision but HIS! Every day, it is true, we die a little and thus we are fading away! When we go though our heart shouldn't be full of regret or any other negative feeling BUT full of love because the ONE who receives us into His arms is pure LOVE! Great sentimental poem! Excellent expressions and rhythm!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:17:00 AM
Demetri mou...this was such an amazing amazing post...Yes, Yes to all of it...I do feel like life is fading away...little by little, but every day we live is written in HIS book before any one of them even came to be, so...He knows when the time is right...Thanks for the ray of light you shed on this...Filakia, my dear professor!!!
Date: 9/21/2013 8:52:00 AM
Very touchy, emotional as well as sentimental expressions penned well, Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/23/2013 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Dr Ram...I so appreciate your valued opinion.... :)
Date: 9/21/2013 8:12:00 AM
well i'm the first here, Eileen, this is wonderful poetry, but not surprisingly knowing of your prowess,, i find this your sentiment very scary ,, yet love to read what you write....
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:15:00 AM
Harry...You are back! I'm so glad for this visit. Hope all is well with you. Yes.....this poem can be taken many ways, Harry. Sometimes...a slow goodbye is less abrasive than an all out...I'm LEAVING, is it not? Thanks for dropping by... :)
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