Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Couplet

A Slip Which Changed My Fate

I slipped on a teardrop and landed
in a pair of arms, warm and with muscles banded.

I knew not this was to be the last drop
which like magic wand would make time stop.

Crying and giggling, I stood like a moron
while his eyes queried if I was done.

In a maze, I remembered some old pun
And knew with him life will now be fun!


Date: 20/06/16
For contest: Cindi Rockwell,
                 I slipped on a teardrop and landed…

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Joseph P. DiMino June 27, 2016 at 10:30 PM To and know you will be caught is beautiful! Lovely work! Sunita U.D Palawon June 28, 2016 at 12:15 PM :D..Thanks a lot!

David Smith June 27, 2016 at 8:07 AM Great words to capture the moment. David from NZ Sunita U.D Palawon June 27, 2016 at 8:35 AM Thanks...you see it like this. I'm glad. Never mind it was not placed for the contest but I liked it when I wrote it. :)

Poet Destroyer A June 26, 2016 at 8:26 AM Sunita, this is SO GOOD. You seem to be an accomplished writer. ;) Linda Sunita U.D Palawon June 27, 2016 at 8:05 AM Thanks...you are making me blush reading this...I write novel and trying poetry since only a month! But do love poetry. Thanks again Linda for the encouraging words and support extended...I really appreciated it. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 23, 2016 at 11:28 AM - So lovely written for this contest, Sunita :) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sunita U.D Palawon June 23, 2016 at 11:31 AM Thanks my dear for your ever encouraging words. Kind of you.:)

Ravi Sathasivam June 22, 2016 at 2:28 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Sunita U.D Palawon June 23, 2016 at 11:30 AM Thanks Ravi, these are nice words. :)

Messoh Vincent June 21, 2016 at 10:05 PM What a simplified way you express the complex subject of love..... You paint it so beautiful till I begin to envy you my dear. hugs.... hugs...... and more hugs :) :) :) A great piece for the contest; I wish you the best dear. Sunita U.D Palawon July 16, 2017 at 12:35 PM Thanks a lot Vincent, I really appreciate your warm and sincere words. I'm just a beginner and learn from you all.:D