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A Slip Which Changed My Fate

I slipped on a teardrop and landed
in a pair of arms, warm and with muscles banded.

I knew not this was to be the last drop
which like magic wand would make time stop.

Crying and giggling, I stood like a moron
while his eyes queried if I was done.

In a maze, I remembered some old pun
And knew with him life will now be fun!


Date: 20/06/16
For contest: Cindi Rockwell,
                 I slipped on a teardrop and landed…

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Joe Dimino Date: 6/27/2016 10:30:00 PM To and know you will be caught is beautiful! Lovely work! Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 6/28/2016 12:15:00 PM :D..Thanks a lot!

David Smith Date: 6/27/2016 8:07:00 AM Great words to capture the moment. David from NZ Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 6/27/2016 8:35:00 AM Thanks...you see it like this. I'm glad. Never mind it was not placed for the contest but I liked it when I wrote it. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/26/2016 8:26:00 AM Sunita, this is SO GOOD. You seem to be an accomplished writer. ;) Linda Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 6/27/2016 8:05:00 AM Thanks...you are making me blush reading this...I write novel and trying poetry since only a month! But do love poetry. Thanks again Linda for the encouraging words and support extended...I really appreciated it. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2016 11:28:00 AM - So lovely written for this contest, Sunita :) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 6/23/2016 11:31:00 AM Thanks my dear for your ever encouraging words. Kind of you.:)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/22/2016 2:28:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 6/23/2016 11:30:00 AM Thanks Ravi, these are nice words. :)

Messoh Vincent Date: 6/21/2016 10:05:00 PM What a simplified way you express the complex subject of love..... You paint it so beautiful till I begin to envy you my dear. hugs.... hugs...... and more hugs :) :) :) A great piece for the contest; I wish you the best dear. Login to Reply Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 7/16/2017 12:35:00 PM Thanks a lot Vincent, I really appreciate your warm and sincere words. I'm just a beginner and learn from you all.:D