A Slight Slip

ice skating was not his dear wife’s forte,
so he bought her membership for birthday,
she started with a skid and fall,
view of her crotch was free for all,
“ dear”, said he, “if you need nickers, please just say!”


10,10,8,8,10 limerick with rhyme of 1,2,5 line
and 3,4th line!

2nd placement
Sponsor Tania Kitchin
Written 28/12/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 12:02 PM
oh what a picture it creates! Good one, and congratulations.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 10:03 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 3:08 PM
very witty krish, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Thank Jan!
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Your work is a winner way to go..Congrats. Sara
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Sara! Appreciate your support!:)
Chamberlain Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Thankfully it was the husband that noticed! Haha congratulations on your winning placement.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Thanks Joanna! Quick action required!:)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your win. I could see this. Oh My!!!! A cute write. Enjoy your win and day with blessings...............
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Thanks Paula! must wear the right gear! kind regards :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Your humor fully "exposed" Krish! Congrats and high fives to celebrate your top win my friend! Way to go!
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Sam! I shall make no attempts at a cover up!:) Cheers!!
Koplin Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations on your win, Krish! Never forget those nickers!
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Mark! indeed!
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Uhoh Krish - cute one! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Thanks Linda! Open to interpretation!
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:01 AM
Krish, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and funny limerick!
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Tania! a lot of falls in the all the contesting limericks! Great theme! Thank you!
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