William Kelii Kekaula Poet Alliteration

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A Slice of Hope

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A Slice of Hope

An apple announces avarice appealing advice
before behemoths bite biblical bits by
connection, can causality creatively compromise chronology
distancing disastrous demonic development duly dissuade
eating Eden's elated enlightenment edibleness evermore?

2022 August 03
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 August 07

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Sam Kauffman August 18, 2022 at 9:15 AM Delightful! Delicious! Discernment! Congrats William! Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula August 18, 2022 at 9:53 AM I appreciate it, Sam, shocking placement of all things my friend, Aloha~William

Anisha Dutta August 8, 2022 at 7:55 AM EXCELLENT In composing poem I like Alliteration most. Big Congrats to win TOP. William Kelii Kekaula August 8, 2022 at 8:12 AM Blessings, Anisha, kind of you to say my friend, Aloha~William

Regina Mcintosh August 8, 2022 at 5:07 AM So interesting and creative. God bless you and Congrats on 1st place. Love, Gina William Kelii Kekaula August 8, 2022 at 5:35 AM Thank you, Gina, it was truly a blessing my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George August 8, 2022 at 4:38 AM So creative with Biblical connotations ! Enjoyed this highly alliterative poem of esoteric nature. Congratulations William on your trophy win in Brian's contest ! William Kelii Kekaula August 8, 2022 at 4:51 AM Hi, Valsa; as I attempt a small return to posting--getting there, thank you, my friend, Aloha~William.

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2022 at 1:24 PM Congratulations on this very well thought out winner. Way to go. A little slice of apple went a long way in it. Sara William Kelii Kekaula August 7, 2022 at 3:42 PM Wondrous sentiments, as usual, Sara, you are heaven sent, and I thank Him for it, Amen my friend, Aloha~William

Janice Canerdy August 7, 2022 at 10:28 AM Hilo Poet, a huge CONGRATS on your top win with this highly creative piece! Janice William Kelii Kekaula August 7, 2022 at 11:40 AM Very kind of you, Janice; I appreciate it. Yond the gibberish, glad its message was well received, after the nuances and all that's needed my friend, Aloha~William