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*Image of Apple Pickeress by Pixabay A Slice of Hope An apple announces avarice appealing advice before behemoths bite biblical bits by connection, can causality creatively compromise chronology distancing disastrous demonic development duly dissuade eating Eden's elated enlightenment edibleness evermore? 2022 August 03 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 August 07

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/18/2022 9:15:00 AM

Delightful! Delicious! Discernment! Congrats William! Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/18/2022 9:53:00 AM

I appreciate it, Sam, shocking placement of all things my friend, Aloha~William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/8/2022 7:55:00 AM

EXCELLENT In composing poem I like Alliteration most. Big Congrats to win TOP.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/8/2022 8:12:00 AM

Blessings, Anisha, kind of you to say my friend, Aloha~William

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/8/2022 5:07:00 AM

So interesting and creative. God bless you and Congrats on 1st place. Love, Gina

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/8/2022 5:35:00 AM

Thank you, Gina, it was truly a blessing my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George

Date: 8/8/2022 4:38:00 AM

So creative with Biblical connotations ! Enjoyed this highly alliterative poem of esoteric nature. Congratulations William on your trophy win in Brian's contest !

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/8/2022 4:51:00 AM

Hi, Valsa; as I attempt a small return to posting--getting there, thank you, my friend, Aloha~William.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2022 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on this very well thought out winner. Way to go. A little slice of apple went a long way in it. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/7/2022 3:42:00 PM

Wondrous sentiments, as usual, Sara, you are heaven sent, and I thank Him for it, Amen my friend, Aloha~William

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/7/2022 10:28:00 AM

Hilo Poet, a huge CONGRATS on your top win with this highly creative piece! Janice

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/7/2022 11:40:00 AM

Very kind of you, Janice; I appreciate it. Yond the gibberish, glad its message was well received, after the nuances and all that's needed my friend, Aloha~William