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A Sky High Adventure

Hengleman Huggermuff wished he could fly and gazed up longingly at the bright azure sky, he got two feathers, tied them onto his arms and attempted to fly in the fields and the farms Alas poor Hengleman didn’t get off the ground it was evident that he’s deemed to be earthbound Every night in bed he dreamed that he could fly when it did not come true he’d lie there and cry He went to the Pollygawk and asked her advice and if she helped him to fly he’d be in paradise The Pollygawk asked all the birds and the bees If they’d help Hengleman fly up past the trees The bees produced honey to brush on his suit whilst birds stuck on feathers, he looked very cute Then the birds and bees towed him into the air when he flapped his arms he flew with such flair In his honeyed bird suit he glided in the jet stream at last Hengleman’s finally fulfilled his one dream Fiction - October 2018 Writing Challenge - Poetry Contest sponsored by Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings 10/17/18
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October 26, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Hi Jan, I really enjoyed your "A Sky High Adventure" tale. I could just picture his my attempts to fly in the sky.Your imagination soared in this write. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:) Alexis
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Thanks Alexis it was fun to write, took me ages to get an idea but once I did it flowed:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Jan, what a delightful story you have created for us. Yes, you could write children's books. You have a great and precious talent and I am pleased to place your poem in first place in my contest, congratulations!
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:34 AM
thanks so much for an inspiring contest, it took me a while to get the idea but after that the poem just flowed from my pen:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Still laughing at Hengelman's name! Congrats on your podium win in the contest with this side-splitter! Best always, Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:35 AM
lol his real name was Gerry Dorsey lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:12 PM
You must be thinking of (H)Engelbert Humperdink(stein), that famous Jewish ballad-dear... LOL. ~ Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 10:25 AM
Thanks Gershon I thought Hengleman sounded like a Hebrew name and I like the alliteration of the H surname:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 23, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Hi Jan, another wonderful story from your pen. I agree with Connie, you could so easily write children's stories. You have such a flair for it. Well, once again the funometer hits the top. I do love dropping by and seeing what you have created. Good luck in the contest Jan. A Fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Mike I try my best to make folks smile and forget their troubles for a while:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 6:41 PM
This is delightful Jan! You would be so great at writing children's stories. Maybe when your son gives you a grandchild in future? I hope this does great Jan. : )
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 6:45 PM
I love writing poems that children would enjoy - son had better hurry up or else I'll be pushing up daisies soon lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 3:04 PM
The name - inimitable, priceless. The poem - a roar. The verdict: Challenge more than met. How delicious can it get, Jan? Really loved this one. A FAVE. Best wishes, Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 3:07 PM
aww thanks so much GW, I struggled to even think of a theme and left writing the poem to the last minute, but when the inspiration hit the poem was such fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Duet Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Such an entertaining piece with great imagery, Jan! I enjoyed this one so much.
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 5:00 AM
Thanks so much Carole:-) hugs jan xx
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October 17, 2018 at 9:23 AM
That was very kind of you to make Huggermuff's dream come true, Jan:) A most enjoyable narrative in rhyme. Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 17, 2018 at 8:16 AM
This is a fun write, Jan. Good luck in the contest
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 4:56 AM
Thanks so much Agnes, it was fun to write:-) hugs jan xx
Green Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:04 AM
This was so very cool Jan. You have created a character, time and place that feels so very real. Your poem moves smoothly so that the reader almost forgets they are reading at all. Best of luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 4:56 AM
Thanks so much Chris, I struggled to find a theme but once I got the idea it was a fun poem to write:-) hugs jan xx
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October 17, 2018 at 7:47 AM
So very inventive Jan, I really enjoyed your tale of adventure and am glad that it had a happy ending! Happy Wednesday xxoo
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 4:55 AM
Thanks so much Mike:-) hugs jan xx
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October 17, 2018 at 6:39 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed your creation..excellent flow and rhythm to your story. Kudos for your creativity..well designed and executed. Excellent fiction, Jan.
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Thanks Vijay:-) Hugs Jan xx
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October 17, 2018 at 6:16 AM
- Yes, he was pretty cute :))) - A wonderful poem, Jan - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Thanks Anne llise it was fun to write, took me ages to think of the theme, then it flowed so easily:-) Hugs Jan xx
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