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A Simple Poem

I read many poems about feelings, thoughts, love So poetically and beautifully written As if floated down from heaven above I cannot write so exquisitely but I am content with what l do My poems are simple and rhyme Though my feelings are as yours From heart and soul combined Poetry presents from all walks of life To all there is a purpose A personal and individual satisfaction For each and everyone of us!

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Charles Messina

Date: 12/12/2023 4:33:00 PM

Well said, Deb. We all have that glitch, the one that mind-boggles us when it comes to certain styles of poetry. Thought provoking write... Charliex

Deb M
Date: 12/15/2023 12:33:00 PM

Indeed we do Charlie some more than others! I am one of the “some more” haha! Always a pleasure…Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/11/2023 7:24:00 PM

Yay! Precisely what I say! ~ Ole!

Deb M
Date: 12/15/2023 12:32:00 PM

Ole BB! Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 12/10/2023 2:11:00 PM

Simple put and understood It is read by many because it's extremely good. Take care, Deb.X X

Deb M
Date: 12/11/2023 11:50:00 AM

You are truly the kindest and loveliest bestie ever….your encouragement and belief in me has never faltered and from the bottom of my heart Shirley l am forever grateful….l am feel blessed to have met you on P.S….wish it had been twenty or more years ago! You restore my faith in people when l am in need of it…..so thankyou for the gift of you Shirley! Debx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/9/2023 7:08:00 PM

Hi Deb Tom sent me a Soupmail saying I might have blocked you. What's funny is I never blocked you but when I checked you were blocked and I do not know how that happened. I hope I corrected this incident. I havent been on in a while. I do not know how this happened. Hope you are well and I would never block you...See you soon...

Deb M
Date: 12/10/2023 7:46:00 AM

Hey Michael…..thankyou for responding so quickly…l knew you wouldn't block me intentionally…..and yes I'm unblocked….that doesn't sound good haha!! Good to see you! Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/8/2023 7:03:00 PM

Poetry comes in so many forms and thoughts. Your voice is both unique and wonderful.

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:06:00 AM

As is yours Jerry!! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/8/2023 2:48:00 PM

simple but filled with beautiful expressions....we all need to be true to our poetic voice and not compare ours to others. Expressing ourselves is purpose enough. Delightful read, Deb. Have a great evening, Sara

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:12:00 AM

Agreed a hundred percent Sara and be happy with who we are! Thankyou as always! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/8/2023 9:55:00 AM

lovely lyrical poem. Requires many cuddles.

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:08:00 AM

Sending you many many cuddles dear Victor! I hope you are well. Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/8/2023 8:38:00 AM

Your words have been painted a lovely write with "A Simple Poem." Love It... Have a blessed day writing away...................

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:08:00 AM

Thankyou lovely Paula!! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/8/2023 6:53:00 AM

Imagine if we all wrote the same style of poetry on here, it would be boring, what I like is the variety of styles on here, keep doing what you're doing, each to his or her own. Tom

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:10:00 AM

Absolutely Tom….thats what makes it so interesting! thankyou! Debx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/8/2023 5:56:00 AM

Simple may be but elegant for sure, Deb. Write on, my friend.

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:10:00 AM

Thankyou Vijay!! Debx

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 3:24:00 AM

You do write exquisitely... always be true to yourself dear Deb.. (alliteration) :)

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:11:00 AM

Always will be SO! Thankyou for your lovely comment….Debx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/8/2023 3:09:00 AM

Very true, poetry is something that soothes our hearts uniquely and give the peace which we desire.. Its not to please anyone rather it's to heal is through our journey and provide satisfaction for ourselves.. One doesn't need to write words poetically extravagant or something if simple yet eloquent words are what tune with the rhythm of their heartbeat.. You've so beautifully said this here :) we are different in our styles yet so alike in soulful ways.

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:18:00 AM

Such a beautiful comment Hiya and so true! Thankyou for sharing your lovely thoughts…. Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2023 3:08:00 AM

You and i we speak the same language in different dialects but we have this soul connection dear debs, whether simple or complex they convey same emotions. And for me a simple poem is better than my hazy metaphors lolol which would drive readers crazy. Love this and keep sharing always! Pleasure reading you always

Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:16:00 AM

Soul sisters and yes we do!!Ha…..Your hazy metaphors (as you call them) are loved by so many my sweet new poet friend! Thankyou as always IE! Debx