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A Silhouette

Plush red velvet pillows rest secluded light bent amid scenic shoji screens ornate vines twist and turn giving way a silhouette stares ahead without face Pin pricked blood blackened by pain drips holes drilled out stitched loop by loop the fabrics of life tying up loose-end-less thoughts Time still lost but never found feelings frost within a frigid wind felt in the recesses of the dark trembling fingers wave farewell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/20/2017 1:38:00 PM
Good Afternoon Tim. Your title and first line set the tone and tell the reader this was going to be quiet and somber with much reflection that makes the reader pause. And yes, the ending line does the same. Sad quiet entries always make for marvelous expression and poetry. Have a wonderful night. Well done
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Date: 5/20/2017 8:36:00 AM
That silhouette play, Indonesian theatre, I love it, including the trembling fingers... Wonderful wonderful metaphor. Painful, but beautiful. Smile my friend :)
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Date: 5/20/2017 4:46:00 AM
A haunting and chilling feel to the words in this poem Tim. Is it a metaphor for the indentured workers? ; )
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Date: 5/19/2017 10:32:00 PM
that last verse so very powerful, amazing poem!
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Date: 5/19/2017 9:22:00 PM
This is nicely done Tim but O.O
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Date: 5/19/2017 3:26:00 PM
Oh that Goodbye ..One can visualize it ..and feel the deep emotion of forever away..Powerful and Sad.
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Date: 5/19/2017 2:42:00 PM
What an interesting and beautiful poem. Who is really that mysterious figure saying goodbye with 'trembling fingers'? Amitiés
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:51:00 AM
seem very dark and beautifully scary
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:41:00 AM
I like this more each time I read it. nicely done.
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:20:00 AM
Kind of dark and kind of sad but really cool my friend.
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