A Silent Wish

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As we sit looking out over
weary western skies,
breathing in the solitude
of twilight’s scented breeze, 
remembering the passing day
and dreaming of spring flowers
waiting just around the bend

I see the evening’s first star
appear beyond the barren maples
above a drowsy horizon,
an opal on a deep violet canvas,
a single heartbeat pulsating
in the late winter heavens,
and I make a silent wish

Chilly winds waft through the fields,
their quiet rush flowing
in tempo with this celestial heartbeat,
when you take my face in your 
silken hands and kiss me,
sweeter than rose petal pudding,
taking my breath completely away 

Then resting your head 
on my shoulder you sigh telling me 
I am everything you have ever wished for
and you will love me forever,
when I feel three heartbeats forming as one
and glancing up at that star once more 
I whisper, “thank you”

3/20/20

For A Star’s Heartbeat poetry contest
Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Jones Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 12:54 AM
This is amazing. Such a beautiful write. Miss you hope you are ok.
Chircop Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:07 PM
Thankyou for this beautiful poem.Hope you re doing well Chris.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 2:18 AM
I am missing your poetry Chris. I hope you are well and return to PSoup soon. Blessings xxoo
Hamilton Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 1:36 PM
This is a wonderful write Chris, I see you haven't been around much either, I hope you are well!
Theraven Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Chris, There's so much to your stars, more than meets the eye. The image of that first star in the clearing, 'an opal on a deep violet canvas'. That still remains with me. -Richard
Warrior Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Great entry my romantic brothern'...you never disappoint ...Happy Easter and best wishes from The Wingster...stay safe :o)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Hello Chris, I love, love, this poem. You created this poem as Free verse. I read it as romantic. This poem will be my fav. Stay safe. Enjoy your day. Peace Nd Joy.
Daniel Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 2:49 AM
Lovely romantic write up, Chris:) some things are better said your way:)
Proxenos Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 11:43 AM
Hi Chris, Have not heard from you for a while - hope you are keeping well - another wonderful gem that you have penned. Good luck in the contest, Blessings, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 10:24 AM
This is beautifully written. So nice to read today. I hope you are well. Take care :)
Wolf Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:02 PM
Pretty as a picture, Chris... Just wondering how you manage to kiss maintaining proper social distance and wearing a mask. LOL. Great contest entry. Cheers, Gershon
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 3:04 AM
Chris, this poem has it all, a wish, the stars and love and romance! I wish this poem had been on the short winner's list. I loved it! Keep safe my friend. xxoo
Green Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so very much Connie
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Rose petal pudding...something sweetly romantic about that!
Green Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Thank you Kim.
Lindsey Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 9:55 AM
I enjoyed your poem, Chris, from the excellent imagery to the loving sentiment at the ending. Very beautiful. Hugs, Catie :-)
Green Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Thank you so much Catie.
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 3:49 PM
Lovely Chris...
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Thanks my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Hello Chris Green, I love this poem filled with love. It has a comforting feeling. Have a nice day my friend. love and peace. Stay well.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Hello Chris, I hope you are well and staying safe. I wish you to have a very nice day. Hugs . Love, and Joy. Your friend Darlene.
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 2:52 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene.
Michael Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Feeling three heartbeats as one...is a whole lot of love...the union of a star baby...Nice one
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much Arturo
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:46 PM
- A wonderful poem, Chris - Best wishes in the contest - Have a safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:52 PM
Thank you my friend, you be safe too.
Faulkner Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 12:43 PM
How poignant and touching, especially the three heartbeats at the end, so tenderly hopeful...
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:52 PM
Thank you so very much Michelle
Bauer Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 12:35 PM
amazingly beautiful, chris! thank you for this...
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Thank you for your comment Ilene.
Adams Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 12:12 PM
this is beautiful Chris...a nice escape from the news all around us... best wishes in the contest... love this... hugs and blessings
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Thank you so very much Sandy. I am happy this one took your mind off of things for a few minutes.
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