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Falling silent against naked cheek… When an emotion stuns or stings Cutting through the composure To free the heart of liquid poison Toxic feelings of pain and sorrow Grief that slashes through self-control Leaving the heart in deep discouragement Touching thoughts with negativity That comes from a lack of sensitivity Lighting the way to eventual joy That comes when one finally lets go Of sorrow, sadness, anguish All the feelings that bring heartache To the one who listens to the beating The throbbing and pounding, the breath Of a silent tear, reflecting the soul Who knows only angst and pain Beliefs colored in hues of ebony Dark thoughts, black coats of sorrow That change dreams to nightmares Hopes to desperateness and misery A sting that eventually lacerates The faith that sustains and remains Even after the sorrow and pain Brings a teardrop to cling to the face Who floods the spirit with shame From allowing the heart to hold onto A flow of disdain, grief and woe That is engrained in the one who knows A silent tear is sometimes the answer To a prayer for relief to this agony!

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Date: 1/26/2021 10:19:00 PM
loveless heart in dark / waiting for such a love touch / At last teardrops crash!~
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:58:00 AM
This is a very beautiful and amazing poem that is so deserving of POTD Regina. Your ending is absolutely perfect. I am putting this into my faves. Belated Congratulations on your POTD honors my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2021 4:45:00 PM
Yes, sometimes, the silent tear is the answer...Congratulations Regina McIntosh on POTD.
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:43:00 AM
WoW! Regina, You have composed such a well written piece on a “ silent teardrop.” Your last line sums up the message of your write perfectly. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/20/2021 2:21:00 AM
Sad memories Victor. Loved the last line. Congrats on your POTD. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 1/19/2021 8:05:00 PM
Very beautiful. I appreciate your style! ***Niyna***
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Date: 1/19/2021 8:00:00 PM
"A silent tear is sometimes the answer" I completely agree. Many times the rain has felt my tears. No one saw. Being able to release emotions of the heart, truly helps in so many ways. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Congratulations Regina, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/19/2021 6:36:00 PM
Amen. Thanks for sharing this. Indeed, "A silent tear is sometimes the answer To a prayer for relief to this agony!" The Lord be praised and thanked for drying our tears. God bless you.
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Date: 1/19/2021 2:44:00 PM
Beautiful and touching, Regina:-) Congratulations on your well-deserved p.o.t.d. recognition!
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Date: 1/19/2021 2:29:00 PM
Regina, such powerful writing from the emotional depths. These words acknowledge the darkness of sorrow while also allowing for the hope in the relief to come, "Lighting the way to eventual joy That comes when one finally lets go". Beautifully written, my congratulations for the POTD honor. Blessings upon your day, my friend ~ John
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Date: 1/19/2021 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations Gina on your POTD. Each line of your poems flows from the previous line. Wonderfully created. "Agony" and hope beautifully expressed! So well written my friend. Blessings and hugs...
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Date: 1/19/2021 1:17:00 PM
Tenderly poitnant, Gina. Congratulations for your wonderul lines.
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Date: 1/19/2021 12:20:00 PM
Gina, a beautiful poem, and a big congratulations on POEM OF THE DAY _Constance
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Date: 1/19/2021 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day Regina. Tears are the soul’s way of dealing with feelings that are in disarray... Blessings, Belle
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Date: 1/19/2021 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "Amazing" write. Your last two lines said it all. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.......................
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Date: 1/19/2021 8:28:00 AM
Thought provoking write Regina - those silent tears are the ones that bring relief from emotional anguish. Magnificent poem dear friend. Congratulations on your POTD, enjoy the day and the honor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/19/2021 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Regina, and congrats on potd...
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Date: 1/19/2021 7:16:00 AM
Hi, Regina! I'd like to offer a thought in connection with your considered write: Ecclesiastes (3:14) states -- A time to cry; a time to laugh. In English it 'sounds better' to reverse the words cry and laugh. However, that would alter the message, which is that the tears precede the joy. Sometimes, as you say, it's best that the tears are silent; other times, it's necessary that they stain the cheek. Either way, there is a time for tears; just as there is for (nearly) unmitigated joy... O.K. Thanks for providing such lovely food for thought, and congrats! Blessings and Bounty, Gershon
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Date: 1/19/2021 7:15:00 AM
https://www.google.com/search?q=teardrops%20on%20my%20pillow Teardrops on my pillow all because of you. Sounds like a Trump theme song.
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Date: 1/19/2021 7:13:00 AM
Very emotional poem, I especially liked the closing lines. Congrats on POTD! John
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Date: 1/19/2021 4:48:00 AM
Congrats Gina on poem of the day. Deeply meaningful and emotive write.
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Date: 1/19/2021 3:27:00 AM
Deep emotions flow throughout this poem Regina. Congrats on your deserving POTD.. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/19/2021 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Highly deserving. ~~
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Date: 1/19/2021 2:41:00 AM
Such a powerful piece Regina, many congratulations on your POTD hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2021 2:30:00 AM
- Congratulations ... (I knew it) ... it had to be p.o.t.d., Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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